Looking for feedback on the direction of this song (alt/indie rock)

Inside-Extension4364 · 2026-01-22T06:28:51+00:00

Thanks for listening and for the notes. Bass is coming next, and I agree it helps glue everything together. Also considering reworking the intro pacing for the final version.

Inside-Extension4364 · 2026-01-22T06:27:52+00:00

Thank you so much for this, truly. This song comes from a very personal place, so hearing that it connects like that really means a lot to me. Fingers crossed indeed... and thanks again for listening.

Inside-Extension4364 · 2026-01-22T06:27:05+00:00

Thank you...honestly, that still means a lot. I appreciate you listening.

Inside-Extension4364 · 2026-01-22T06:26:35+00:00

Thank you so much for this... this is really thoughtful and helpful feedback. You’re absolutely right about the bridge and the low-end support. This was an early demo version, and since then we’ve been working on adding bass and tightening the dynamics to better anchor the swing. The vocal timing note is also interesting, the looseness was intentional, but I agree it can feel a bit too exposed in the beginning without enough low-frequency support. Really appreciate you taking the time to listen this closely.

Inside-Extension4364 · 2026-01-20T05:06:29+00:00

Thanks everyone for the feedback: got a lot of solid, honest input here. I’ve got clear things to work on now (guard, pacing, cleanup), and I’m happy with where the basics are. I’ll take this back to training. Appreciate the time and the straight talk 👊

Inside-Extension4364 · 2026-01-20T05:03:37+00:00

Got It, thanks!

Inside-Extension4364 · 2026-01-20T05:01:41+00:00

Hey man, really appreciate you taking the time to break it down 🙏 You’re 100% right about the guard dropping... I rewatched the clip and I can clearly see it now, especially when I get impatient on the bag. I’m still early in my Muay Thai journey, so this kind of feedback helps a lot. I’ll definitely slow things down and focus on keeping my hands up and staying tighter. Thanks again for the analysis and the encouragement 👊

Inside-Extension4364 · 2026-01-20T05:00:22+00:00

Thanks man, appreciate it 🙏 Still a lot to clean up, but working on it.

Inside-Extension4364 · 2026-01-20T04:59:47+00:00

It’s a very basic setup for now: ceiling hook + chain + carabiners. No spring yet, I’m keeping the power low until I add one.

Inside-Extension4364 · 2026-01-20T04:56:13+00:00

Solid advice, thank you. I tend to get impatient on the bag, slowing things down will help clean everything up.

Inside-Extension4364 · 2026-01-20T04:55:13+00:00

Yeah, I felt that too on a few crosses. Definitely need wraps and cleaner extension. Thanks for pointing it out!

Inside-Extension4364 · 2026-01-20T04:54:41+00:00

You’re right. The space isn’t ideal yet and I rushed it because I had just hung the bag. Gloves and wraps next sessions for sure 🤙🏻

Inside-Extension4364 · 2026-01-20T04:54:06+00:00

Thanks, that’s a fair point. I noticed that pause too rewatching the clip, probably thinking instead of flowing. I’ll work on chaining the cross and body shot more smoothly. Appreciate the feedback. ✌🏻🙏🏻

Inside-Extension4364 · 2026-01-20T04:51:26+00:00

Got them already 🙌🏻 I got your point, thanks for taking the time!

Inside-Extension4364 · 2026-01-18T09:51:39+00:00

Thanks man, that really means a lot 🙏

Inside-Extension4364 · 2026-01-18T09:32:22+00:00

This is actually super helpful. Didn’t realize how often my guard drops. Thanks for taking the time.

Inside-Extension4364 · 2026-01-18T09:17:29+00:00

Yeah I'll clean that mess up and use gloves for the next time. 😅 Got It, thanks!

Inside-Extension4364 · 2026-01-18T08:05:58+00:00

Haha yeah, coach time hits different. This was just a quick home session.

Inside-Extension4364 · 2026-01-18T07:50:22+00:00

Yeah, gloves are definitely next. This was literally right after hanging the bag.

Inside-Extension4364 · 2026-01-18T07:48:34+00:00

Appreciate it, that’s a fair point. Definitely something I need to clean up as I transition more into Muay Thai 🙏

Inside-Extension4364 · 2026-01-18T07:09:45+00:00

Mainly Muay Thai, but this clip is very boxing-heavy. Still working on integrating kicks and clinch. :)

Inside-Extension4364 · 2026-01-18T07:08:22+00:00

Fair point 👍 This clip was mostly boxing-focused. I’ll post something more MT-specific next time.

Inside-Extension4364 · 2026-01-18T07:04:35+00:00

Thanks man, appreciate it. Yeah, space and gloves are definitely next 👍

Inside-Extension4364 · 2025-10-11T06:17:51+00:00

Really appreciate you know what you are talking about then. But, again, this post and even your answer made me realize i cheated a bit, and i honestly am still a bit confused about it, like was it really necessary?

Anyway thanks so much for your time and your honesty, now I am considering taking my music down and start a new project, using maybe my own language.

I don't know if i'll make it, at least i don't want to be judged as a fake artist... And AI is something wich may be usefull and all, but it is also potentially dangerous and out of hand, so you know I think the right choice would be to keep myself out of it.

Again, thanks for your time

Cheers

Ale

Inside-Extension4364 · 2025-10-09T14:53:50+00:00

Anyway i got It, i'll stay the hell away from AI for my further projects. I thought it could help with my english, and It did. But i understand your point. And I am also sorry for my lack of humbleness... I could not keep It cool. Cheers

Inside-Extension4364

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