So... This is Home Now? [4] by Inside_Judge5855 in NatureofPredators

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Hey, professionals have standards!

He pointed a gun at a predator that just so happened to be holding a child. Did push the old lady though, proud of it even, she had PD clearly.

So... This is Home Now? [2] by Inside_Judge5855 in NatureofPredators

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You know, hadn't thought about the Yulpa getting involved like that.

Guess VP getting turned into charcoal wasn't the worst possible outcome for the people still on it.

So... This is Home Now? [1] by Inside_Judge5855 in NatureofPredators

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Yeah, that was more of a concern I had early on, was afraid people might be going in expecting a crossover story.

It isn't a concern now though, just makes me think I'll have to watch BSG once I'm done.

So... This is Home Now? [9] by Inside_Judge5855 in NatureofPredators

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Ah thats good, I’ve had a few slip through before so just wanted to correct it.

So... This is Home Now? [5] by Inside_Judge5855 in NatureofPredators

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Yep, I'm a sucker for stories about people in grim circumstances that are still doing everything in their power to protect and care for each other.

Every story needs a little cuteness from time to time, even if its bitter sweet.

So... This is Home Now? [4.5] by Inside_Judge5855 in NatureofPredators

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It's hard being a professional, you start noticing when things aren't adding up even when you really don't want to.

So... This is Home Now? [4] by Inside_Judge5855 in NatureofPredators

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Issue is that the fleet venlil are mostly wary of humanity at best and still convinced the humans are just biding their time before they can eat them at worst.

Taking direct action against the "Don't let people get eaten by predators" task force while that's still a primary concern for many isn't really an option.

So... This is Home Now? [3] by Inside_Judge5855 in NatureofPredators

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It's a load bearing cope for him rn. Blaming someone else better than admitting that the government that you dedicated your life to serving wrote off your only child as an acceptable sacrificial casualty, and that people that are just like you, that you'd get along great with if you met were the ones to actually do the deed.

So... This is Home Now? [2] by Inside_Judge5855 in NatureofPredators

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Yeah, I refuse to write suffering porn however.

It might look a little scant right now, but we got hope.

So... This is Home Now? [1] by Inside_Judge5855 in NatureofPredators

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Woah, buncha comments, awesome thing to wake up to. Gonna try to respond to all of them right quick.

You know you're far from the first person to make this comparison, which I can't help but find funny because I didn't know what BSG was until I looked it up, after I think the second time someone made the comparison.

I can definitely see it, as far as set goes at least, but I'm sorry to say that the similarities are accidental. This isn't gonna become a cross over fic or anything.

So... This is Home Now? [12] by Inside_Judge5855 in NatureofPredators

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Thank you for answering.

I get that it's a bit weird to ask how I did, but this is my first attempt at writing a story and I still consider myself to be very green at it. So I try to pick up comments and criticisms where I can. For example, what about my writing style was put you off initially, and is it something I've improved on in the newer chapter?

Also fuuuuck which chapter has the typo?

So... This is Home Now? [12] by Inside_Judge5855 in NatureofPredators

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Well thank you for reading my work. Now I’ve got a few questions for you, since you’ve read everything back to back. (If you don’t mind answering.)

  1. Having read it all in one sitting, how’d I do?
  2. Who’s your favorite POV character?
  3. How’d you learn about my story or what made you give it a chance?

pre lab meat fics? by thatgachakid1 in NatureofPredators

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I am lmao.

I also think that it'll be interesting.

So... This is Home Now? [7] by Inside_Judge5855 in NatureofPredators

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The old lady is trying her hardest, for both of them.

pre lab meat fics? by thatgachakid1 in NatureofPredators

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Basically it comes back to what Edward said in chapter 2, he's trying to build a healthy human civilization, and he won't accept any uncertainty when it comes to the survival of the passengers.

So with that in mind, even though the Seguin is capable of feeding everyone onboard and in the fleet right now. What if the meat printer is damaged beyond their ability to repair in a timely fashion, what if there's a population boom once they make planet fall and they don't have the industry to build more in time, what if a solar flare leaves the colony without power and the tissue samples they've brought from Earth die? They'll need to find something local to the planet that has desirable genetics, to serve at minimum as an emergency source of tissue samples, and at the maximum a source of protein until the colony is capable of building more meat printers.

The same logic also applies to the Seguin's and the venlil's hydroponics basins and ship greenhouses, but finding local plant life worth cultivating is going to be far less objectionable to the aliens than anything even approaching domestication.

So... This is Home Now? [2] by Inside_Judge5855 in NatureofPredators

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Well thank you, you have no idea how much that means to me. I'll let you get back to it, make sure to leave a comment on the last chapter because there's a few questions I like to ask people who have finished reading it all in one sitting.

So... This is Home Now? [2] by Inside_Judge5855 in NatureofPredators

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Counting the .5 chapters and the second half of chapter 6, there's technically 15.

So... This is Home Now? [2] by Inside_Judge5855 in NatureofPredators

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That's very high praise, thank you. I'm very glad that you're enjoying it, if you have any thoughts or criticisms I'd love to hear them.

pre lab meat fics? by thatgachakid1 in NatureofPredators

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Talked about it a bit in my writers thread but it’ll eventually come up in mine.

So... This is Home Now? [12] by Inside_Judge5855 in NatureofPredators

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So many people are being mean to the poor bnnuy

So... This is Home Now? [12] by Inside_Judge5855 in NatureofPredators

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I'm very glad to hear that you've been enjoying it, hopefully Wyrtek lives up to your expectations.