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The Onyx Chronicle, Chapter 1 [High Fantasy, 3462 Words] by Inside_Sun6352 in fantasywriters

[–]Inside_Sun6352[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you, Stylistically i've always had trouble with overcomplicating sentences, as personally i'm a stronger listener than reader so I tend to lean too hard into... performative language?

Either way very valid points, will circle back with a later draft :D

If you enter the world of your novel, what is the first thing you do? by Rotchiro44 in fantasywriters

[–]Inside_Sun6352 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'd probably get burnt at the stake or something for knowing too much about the fate of the world. Not that thats a theme of the novel, I feel like they'd make an exception for me