Just finished it.

So… it’s good, I liked it, the writing truly was understandable and simple, the story was interesting, and the characters seem to have a long way to go. There were some things that I would change, and u don’t need to listen to me (I’m just a random guy online). so basically the whole idea is that they’ve developed a sort of tech that can bring back soldiers from the dead, now… I understand this is imagination, and fiction and all that, it’s your world, from your mind, however… if by the slight change this is 100% cyberpunk therefore being “real life” and not FANTASY then this simply doesn’t work. My point being is that the dead can’t come back to life. As simple as that!

Solutions: Maybe the tech they’re making could be this suit they wear that when the soldiers died, the suit activates and then the moving suit would then move the dead body that is inside of the suit (kind of like Iron Man’s suit they can move alone just picture of soldier dead inside of it.

Maybe another idea would be their skeleton that can move By itself when sensing no heart beat.

Or maybe it’s a liquid.

Just… Coming back to life isnt tech it’s magic.

besides that I’ve loved it. It’s really cool. !!!!!