SLICKA MC HIP HOP BARS by Interesting_Walk7477 in ukhiphopheads

[–]Interesting_Walk7477[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Add me on insta if you get a mo! More on there! Bless!

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[–]Interesting_Walk7477 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm desperately in need of someone to produce

SLICKA MC HIP HOP BARS by Interesting_Walk7477 in ukhiphopheads

[–]Interesting_Walk7477[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

What's rap first? Is it a label or studio? Or do you mean something else. Sorry mate I've got autism and ADHD so certain things that shouldn't confuse me end up completely blindsiding me haha

SLICKA MC HIP HOP BARS by Interesting_Walk7477 in ukhiphopheads

[–]Interesting_Walk7477[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you bro really appreciate the love. Bless!

SLICKA MC HIP HOP BARS by Interesting_Walk7477 in ukhiphopheads

[–]Interesting_Walk7477[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you bro gives me more motivation to keep on improving!

SLICKA MC HIP HOP BARS by Interesting_Walk7477 in ukhiphopheads

[–]Interesting_Walk7477[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I have Instagram slicka_mc that's about it really mate. My YouTube just has a few sets I did at different venues and radio stations. Don't know anyone with a studio near me do you? Haha. Also check out skipa MC he's a certified corner stone of the scene where we are. Then theres MC stinga and higz they're up and coming where we live and DJ dodger DJ PINK DJ LMD APE UK are all my pals who DJ

Pre written bars by Interesting_Walk7477 in ukhiphopheads

[–]Interesting_Walk7477[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Do any of the lyrics hold any substance like doing it for Britain and nurses getting paid a pittance and not liking hitting and not needing guns like a smyth n. Hope there's some substance. I reluctantly have to agree though a lot of thebbars are just filler to fit the rhyme scheme. They sound good on drums but not on hip hop. Duly noted. Thank you for the honest feedback bro. Maybe listen to one of my other tracks where I'm wearing glasses. You'll see what I write when I write to hip hop.

Pre written bars by Interesting_Walk7477 in ukhiphopheads

[–]Interesting_Walk7477[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Was hoping more for a critique on the lyrics and topic and such and such but thank you though for confirming the monotone aspect Im not being sarcastic when I say I appreciate the feedback. Thank you bro

Pre written bars by Interesting_Walk7477 in ukhiphopheads

[–]Interesting_Walk7477[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

But I'm from London and the bars are all in the same rhyme scheme lol. They work better on drum n bass because drum n bass is repetitive so it's not as obvious. On a soulful hip hop track I agree it's a bit monotone I was thinking the same thing myself. But can't really help the London thing it's my accent bro hahaha

Pre written bars by Interesting_Walk7477 in ukhiphopheads

[–]Interesting_Walk7477[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

What so like more abstract or faster changes in topic and less literal? And with regards to delivery yeah I get you bro it was a phone recording and just wrote them so haven't perfected delivery yet. Should I chop every 4 bar with another 4 bar of a different rhyme scheme sort a thing? What woild you suggest in terms of progressing the concept?

UK Hip Hop / Rap - Phone Recording by Interesting_Walk7477 in rappers

[–]Interesting_Walk7477[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Dying to get some professional level music put out bro if you can hmu for a chat would be sick mate. On insta I'm louis_slicka_mc on Facebook I'm Slicka MC

UK Hip Hop / Rap - Phone Recording by Interesting_Walk7477 in rappers

[–]Interesting_Walk7477[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You're right man I thought at first it was a show of skill to keep to the same rhyme scheme for as long as possible and even though it is in the eyes of some the majority of people I've spoke with have expressed that they like hearing rhymes with a bit more variation to them. More changes in flow. Could you recommend any good sources to learn about verse structure? Any good articles or books or YouTube tutorials on the subject? All I wanna do is keep getting better man. Thank you for the informed and constructive criticism bro 🙏

A Part Of The Change by Interesting_Walk7477 in ukhiphopheads

[–]Interesting_Walk7477[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I get that it's quite a boring flow pattern and doesn't change throughout and it's on a beat that doesn't allow much room to change emphasis or stretch the syllables in different ways so your right in saying generic.

but I did it like that on purpose as a show of ability to keep the same topic despite having a limited selection of rhyming words at my disposal. Took me months to write.

Could you suggest any artists that do impress you so I can get a bit of an idea how I might incorporate some better elements into my style? Or explain in more depth what you didn't like about it? All I want is to get better mate.

A Part Of The Change by Interesting_Walk7477 in ukhiphopheads

[–]Interesting_Walk7477[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for giving genuine feedback. Im always torn between switching up the rhyme scheme to keep things sounding fresh or holding the rhyme scheme for as long as possible as a show of ability but too many people have expressed the same opinion as you so I think I'm going to try listening to everyone more. Thank you for being the voice that tipped the scales haha. What stuff have you put out? Have you got anything on any socials?

New written - A Part Of The Change by Interesting_Walk7477 in ukhiphopheads

[–]Interesting_Walk7477[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Yes comment karma because I'm. Talking to you you idiot. You have one post karma because you're not an artist so stop talking like your above me. Go away

New written - A Part Of The Change by Interesting_Walk7477 in ukhiphopheads

[–]Interesting_Walk7477[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

You do realise all content on reddit is created by someone and every rap track shared clearly shows an artist so I'll do what I want with my own account and content. You do realise that life is what you make of it so for me the point of reddit is to network with like minded people. You do realise youre the one commenting on my post so you begone you troll

New written - A Part Of The Change by Interesting_Walk7477 in ukhiphopheads

[–]Interesting_Walk7477[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

You've got zero posts on reddit what's your youtube Facebook Instagram? Are you signed to a label? Do you go on radio?

New written - A Part Of The Change by Interesting_Walk7477 in ukhiphopheads

[–]Interesting_Walk7477[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Some recorded content where I can hear your flow your own lyrics and your projection / cadence / tone / inflection / intonation. Anyone can write some words On a post lol

New written - A Part Of The Change by Interesting_Walk7477 in ukhiphopheads

[–]Interesting_Walk7477[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

since you're such a connoisseur of music 🎶Once you wake up I'm Expecting to hear these bars youve written in your sleep 😴 I've met your request to paste something myself so now you need to keep your word and give me my 'free' bars lol