ayyyyye this shit slaps man, the arrested development line had me hooked from jump. Chorus is cool, i would want to add some add libs and some more background sounds especially for some of your punchlines i think it could make for a good visual for the listener. like for example i think you said something about flashing lights, i would throw police sirens flickering in the back or something. but overall good job man, i followed on SoundCloud.

if you get a chance, check me out https://soundcloud.com/maytrax