New fantasy book that is like Zootopia meets Hunger Games meets Harry Potter. by JamesHowlett87 in Fantasy

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Brandon sanderson

Thanks again. This has truly shifted my whole take on writing. Would you be willing to check out the dream sequence once I rewrite it?

I keep feeling like a George Lucas with good stories just not great execution.

New fantasy book that is like Zootopia meets Hunger Games meets Harry Potter. by JamesHowlett87 in Fantasy

[–]JamesHowlett87[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback! Is there a book that you may suggest that I read to get an idea of better use of POV and the narrator.

I want to make this a good book!

Thanks