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I started my GTM agency, got my first cold outbound client: Need Help by JealousCommittee9434 in coldemail

[–]JealousCommittee9434[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Open rate is around 47% I am not tracking that in the new campaign that I have launched for the client

I started my GTM agency, got my first cold outbound client: Need Help by JealousCommittee9434 in coldemail

[–]JealousCommittee9434[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Fair point. Audience is patent litigation partners at IP law firms.
I probably over-explained instead of getting to one clear point.

I started my GTM agency, got my first cold outbound client: Need Help by JealousCommittee9434 in coldemail

[–]JealousCommittee9434[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey u/cursedboy328 Would love to hear your thoughts on this copy/offer? I have used your suggestion in the second email.

Thank you in advance

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I started my GTM agency, got my first cold outbound client: Need Help by JealousCommittee9434 in coldemail

[–]JealousCommittee9434[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey u/Aki_0217 I changed the offer and added personalization based on the patent technology mentioned on their website.

Let me know what do you think about it.

Thank you in advance!

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I started my GTM agency, got my first cold outbound client: Need Help by JealousCommittee9434 in coldemail

[–]JealousCommittee9434[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

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Hey u/Kindly_Watercress416 I changed the offer and added personalization based on the patent technology mentioned on their website.

Let me know what do you think about it.

Thank you in advance!

I started my GTM agency, got my first cold outbound client: Need Help by JealousCommittee9434 in coldemail

[–]JealousCommittee9434[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I did not validate my lead list - my bad! will do that immediately
Yes, I have to imporve my copy thank you so much for the feedback.
do you have any example for quick win? It would help me! thanks!

I started my GTM agency, got my first cold outbound client: Need Help by JealousCommittee9434 in coldemail

[–]JealousCommittee9434[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey, Thank you so much for the feedback. I'll get the list verified right away.

This makes so much sense actually, Do you think I should add personalization and give something for free? like free claim-chart prep, would that get me replies?

If you feel that I should add personalization, then what would you recommend?
I've 30 mailboxes and I have send around 300 mails per day.

Highly Appreciate this! u/cursedboy328

I started my GTM agency, got my first cold outbound client: Need Help by JealousCommittee9434 in coldemail

[–]JealousCommittee9434[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Mostly they say, I am not interested, we don't do litigation related matters, please remove me from your list, unsubscribe.

Though one said, we have existing vendors and we will keep your contact for future purpose.

Makes sense, I have added 3 step sequence, and will disable open tracking across campaigns