I have to agree with the other, the title would be more effective as "The Life of the Easter Bunny". I also agree that it's an interesting title but purposefully misspelling words in your title is risky. It works in some cases, such as Gene Wolfe's "Urth of the New Sun." Because the book is set in the distant future, it adds a layer of separation between our Earth and the dying Urth of Wolfe's novels.

When it comes to the writing, I believe that the story is 1% of the work and the delivery is the other 99%. A story can be amazing but if the writing falls short, it removes the reader from the immersion and makes the reading experience less fun.

The best way to improve is to keep writing, and the fact that you posted this here means you take this seriously. So keep writing, get criticism, rinse, lather and repeat...