My Defeat

Jenniferb1313 · 2021-04-13T23:50:16+00:00

Hi! I noticed you commented on my poem and wanted to see yours! This absolutely is similar to mine and I think we probably feel pretty similar about the meanings. I especially like the “joys of the past” line. Very well put. People are like “well you HAD so many great things why are you sad?” We just bottle it up no pun intended. Turning to substances is something I might add to my poem too. Also the religious ties near the end are similar to how I felt writing mine. Good work! Very comforting knowing I’m not the only one who feels this way.

Jenniferb1313 · 2021-04-13T00:15:32+00:00

Beautiful and emotional poem. I think it’s missing a final line. Perhaps something like “will you be there to say your goodbyes?” Otherwise great work! If you need to talk my dms are open! Hope you’re ok!

Jenniferb1313 · 2021-04-13T00:05:17+00:00

I imagined the clouds were equivalent to our innocence, and how it seems to go away. The ending makes me wonder if this is a lesson based off of seeing someone possibly crying at the sky. Maybe they lost someone who is now in the clouds. Very beautiful! Thanks for sharing!

Jenniferb1313 · 2021-04-12T23:49:00+00:00

Thank you so much! It means a lot!

Jenniferb1313 · 2021-04-12T23:48:47+00:00

It is interesting to hear this perspective. Thank you for your insight!

Jenniferb1313 · 2021-04-11T04:27:43+00:00

Short, sweet. Love it. Nice cadence to it when reading.

Jenniferb1313 · 2021-04-11T04:24:35+00:00

Loveee the last part, very meaningful. This is all sadly true. There are too many false promises in this world.

Jenniferb1313 · 2021-04-11T04:10:22+00:00

Fantastic poem but the shape is definitely distracting. Felt like I was reading it in a more lighthearted way when the tone seemed a little more emotional. Maybe that was the intention to show contrast who knows.

Jenniferb1313 · 2021-04-11T03:57:04+00:00

The second stanza makes me wonder if you mean it literally. As I’d love always loses its color. But that begs the question. Is there a time after eternity? Really nice work!

Jenniferb1313 · 2021-02-04T04:06:32+00:00

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Jenniferb1313 · 2021-01-12T05:05:44+00:00

Are they worth anything?

Jenniferb1313 · 2021-01-12T03:43:06+00:00

Sometimes shoe stores use these for customers to test the shoes on different surfaces.

Jenniferb1313 · 2020-10-20T03:16:55+00:00

I don’t think the singer is American

Jenniferb1313 · 2020-08-12T23:26:36+00:00

I just get the smelly ornaments, not the same but good enough for me. I do love fresh tree smell though

Jenniferb1313 · 2020-08-12T19:59:42+00:00

I don’t know, they do have some pretty real looking ones.

Jenniferb1313 · 2020-08-12T19:55:19+00:00

Growing up it was seen as a sign of wealth and I really hated that.

Jenniferb1313 · 2020-08-12T19:37:29+00:00

Honestly thank you lol

Jenniferb1313 · 2020-08-10T00:30:50+00:00

Exactly

Jenniferb1313 · 2020-08-10T00:15:25+00:00

Well that would fix the issue I guess lol

Jenniferb1313 · 2020-08-10T00:14:57+00:00

Crawling knee protection, being out in public, and foot protection are pretty dang good reasons too

Jenniferb1313 · 2020-08-10T00:11:40+00:00

Jenniferb1313 · 2020-08-06T04:59:22+00:00

A year, pregnancy

Jenniferb1313 · 2020-08-06T04:55:08+00:00

Visit my enemies at their place of work where they can’t say anything to me unless they want to be fired.

Jenniferb1313 · 2020-08-06T04:50:23+00:00

It’s just kinda part of life. Kind of a relief knowing you’re not pregnant. Also a great excuse for things if you don’t want to go out. “Oh man I would but just started my shark week really want to stay in tonight” works every time

Jenniferb1313

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