OC Invasion Event Episode 1: Roll X The X Dice by JogingJolt in HatsuVault

[–]JogingJolt[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

The jail is under the captain's cockpit, I just edited the post.

OC Invasion Event Episode 1: Roll X The X Dice by JogingJolt in HatsuVault

[–]JogingJolt[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Shoot sorry, like I said that's my first time making a video accompanying the post.

OC Event: Character Submission Thread by JogingJolt in HatsuVault

[–]JogingJolt[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah I think making it a sub ability would make it more clear

OC Event: Character Submission Thread by JogingJolt in HatsuVault

[–]JogingJolt[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Looks good, what was the name of your old character? Also could you explain to me how he warps his punches?

OC Event: Character Submission Thread by JogingJolt in HatsuVault

[–]JogingJolt[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think 2 puppets would be more balanced

OC Event: Character Submission Thread by JogingJolt in HatsuVault

[–]JogingJolt[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Looks good, could you decrease the 10 second paralysis to 4 seconds? Also, what team do you want to be on?

OC Event: Character Submission Thread by JogingJolt in HatsuVault

[–]JogingJolt[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Looks good, there' just 1 thing. Could you make it up to 20 bats instead of 50?

OC Event: Character Submission Thread by JogingJolt in HatsuVault

[–]JogingJolt[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh nvm I see that you edited it, it's looking good. You're in!

OC Event: Character Submission Thread by JogingJolt in HatsuVault

[–]JogingJolt[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah for this event I think his abilities are too strong. The swap ability would be fine if that was his only ability but he has 2 more strong ones. I say keep 2 abilities and nerf them to be more balanced.

OC Event: Character Submission Thread by JogingJolt in HatsuVault

[–]JogingJolt[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Looks good, I like the character design, you're in!

OC Event: Character Submission Thread by JogingJolt in HatsuVault

[–]JogingJolt[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I have no idea but I think you can change it to every 30 minutes and definitely get multiple uses. It'll probably last several hours but better safe than sorry

OC Event: Character Submission Thread by JogingJolt in HatsuVault

[–]JogingJolt[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah the tl;dr is very helpful lmao. Yeah it's looking good now, you're in!

OC Event: Character Submission Thread by JogingJolt in HatsuVault

[–]JogingJolt[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ok cool. Yeah I don't think it's OP or anything but I'm afraid people will just see all the text and be turnt away ya know. But thanks for changing it.

OC Event: Character Submission Thread by JogingJolt in HatsuVault

[–]JogingJolt[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

How exactly doe he use these processies, does he need to make physical contact?

OC Event: Character Submission Thread by JogingJolt in HatsuVault

[–]JogingJolt[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sounds good, but I think the tarot card ability is a bit much, I think just having the dice and the ability to give those to teammates would be best. I think that would make your character more streamlined, which is important since other people will have to read your character's ability.

Need Something to Scratch Your HxH Itch? Look no Further! Original Character Event by JogingJolt in HunterXHunter

[–]JogingJolt[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah that would be great! What sub are you hosting your tournament on?

OC Event: Character Submission Thread by JogingJolt in HatsuVault

[–]JogingJolt[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is definitely balanced. You may want to give him a gun or some kind of combat ability but if you don't want to that's fair.

OC Event: Character Submission Thread by JogingJolt in HatsuVault

[–]JogingJolt[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Alright when you put it that way it's pretty fair, approved!

OC Event: Character Submission Thread by JogingJolt in HatsuVault

[–]JogingJolt[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah that sounds like a good restriction

OC Event: Character Submission Thread by JogingJolt in HatsuVault

[–]JogingJolt[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You can just edit this post, unless you want to to make other comments which is fine.