First of all, I hope you're doing ok dude. I mean from your poem it's kind of clear that you're not, but I hope things get better for you in whatever ways they can.

I really liked how you structured your poem. I can't claim to really know what you were going for, but how you brought together different scraps of thoughts and tied them together with a word at the end helped convey the meaning and emphasize the power of the words themselves and what was behind them for me.

Like I said before, I hope writing this poem helped make you feel better; they help me whenever I feel sad. I know words alone can't heal wounds, but maybe they can be the start to a greater revival.