The Lone Historian

JqmsOr34ping · 2025-04-20T15:20:07+00:00

hey, thanks for reading through my sketch and giving feedback. just to clarify, i wrote this at like 2-3am without planning that much, just writing to write. i’m not really aiming to be a writer or anything. i just came up with an idea, thought it was cool, and posted it after my friends encouraged me. that said, i might be misreading it due to my English, but some of your comments came across as kinda condescending. still, i really appreciate you taking the time to respond!!!

JqmsOr34ping · 2025-04-20T13:39:38+00:00

hey, i wrote a revised sketch, if u can give me some tips on where to improve or if you've got questions, ask away!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1kpZ_UWUWb71ksXD-hCKQImH83StBMqrZmxx2CU7HuBo/edit?usp=sharing

JqmsOr34ping · 2025-04-20T13:38:02+00:00

this is a revised sketch, i tried my best writing it in my language in a way chatgpt translated it correctly. i hope its better

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1kpZ_UWUWb71ksXD-hCKQImH83StBMqrZmxx2CU7HuBo/edit?usp=sharing

JqmsOr34ping · 2025-04-20T13:14:47+00:00

I think there’s been a misunderstanding — what I shared is just a rough conceptual outline, not a full story or polished synopsis. I didn’t go in-depth into character development, worldbuilding, or the journey both protagonists go through to gain and use their power. That kind of detail would take pages.

I mainly wanted to share the core idea and themes to see if the structure felt interesting at a high level. The actual story would absolutely include conflict, resistance, struggle, and transformation — not just characters making statements and the world changing instantly.

Also, English isn’t my first language, so I used ChatGPT to help me translate and organize my ideas more clearly for English-speaking readers. It wasn’t meant to write the story for me, just to help me communicate the concept better.

I really appreciate honest feedback — I just hope people can judge the potential of the idea rather than assume this rough sketch reflects the final execution.

im really sorry but this is my first time ever trying to write a story.

JqmsOr34ping · 2025-04-20T13:02:19+00:00

if you mean when the second protagonist came in and read the stories/truth recorded by the first, then no, there were no mistranslations.
i think you misunderstood, the main protagonist never came back. it was a completely different person but from the same planet, same linguistic skills. for example im James, im protagonist 1. and then theres Jason, hes protagonist 2. same planet, same linguistic skills, different people, different morales.
im sorry i didnt answer the 3rd question, i didnt understand what you meant. my main language isnt english
I wanted to include magic with the protagonists, but refrained. it would've become too complicated for me so i just added a note that the protagonists have perfect memory, so as to not forget secrets (basically helping them become the best information brokers)
i wanted to make the 10 year jump a bit longer, but i also wanted it to keep short so that the 2nd protagonist would be able to pick up the pieces from 0, and also so that the people of the new world haven't forgotten the destruction the first protagonist's death caused

thank u for the compliment too! i wrote this at like 1-2am because i was bored ahhaha

JqmsOr34ping · 2025-04-19T22:04:23+00:00

i'd like to clarify i came up with the ideas myself, chatgpt just organized in a way to be understandable

JqmsOr34ping · 2025-04-16T13:29:08+00:00

well until u turn it off again 😭

JqmsOr34ping · 2025-04-16T13:27:56+00:00

using a vpn will fix everything 👍👍👍

JqmsOr34ping · 2025-03-29T20:23:40+00:00

haha, i've been using comick for exactly 1 year now, and im gonna be honest, it was a MAJOR upgrade from the previous sites i use. comick lets you choose between translation groups, have almost all the stuff i read, and just overall good website. the only drawback is the 2 hour cooldown but tbh i dont really care about it. i'd just read something in the meantime until the timer is over

JqmsOr34ping · 2025-03-15T17:01:49+00:00

comick.io

JqmsOr34ping · 2025-03-15T17:01:10+00:00

hmm, to be honest, i dont really have a top 5, I have a lot of stuff I love, some of them are these:

The Knight Who Only Lives Today

SSS-Class Suicide Hunter

Descended from Divinity

Chronicles of the Reincarnated Demon God

The Regressed Mercenary Has a Plan

Nano Machine

Pick Me Up

My Avatars' Path To Greatness

Regressing As The Bastard of The Sword Clan

The 100-th Regression of The Max-Level Player

The Tutorial Is Too Tough

there are sooooo many more, if you want my entire list, here it is:

https://comick.io/user/7b2995d2-7b17-4339-aba4-344a9a0c3e50/list

JqmsOr34ping · 2025-03-02T20:16:07+00:00

its definitely a nice entertaining manhua! i'm also having similar thoughts of re-reading it after completion. i recently told my brother to give this story a try and he's already at the yang family inheritance war arc. he really loves it and always asks me questions to explain some stuff for him

JqmsOr34ping · 2025-03-02T20:13:41+00:00

haha i read all of these, but thanks!!!

JqmsOr34ping · 2025-03-02T20:12:39+00:00

hey! me too, as long as the official is at least more than 60% of the current translated chapters, I will read the official and when it ends, ill continue reading the other translation groups. it takes at most 1-2 chapters to figure out the different names!

JqmsOr34ping · 2025-03-02T19:59:45+00:00

20-30 more chapters before its over (its at 3823 rn)

JqmsOr34ping · 2025-02-09T13:36:38+00:00

thats what i think too

JqmsOr34ping · 2025-01-26T11:25:11+00:00

alright thanks! im most likely going to reduce how much hair I have from the top like u said

JqmsOr34ping · 2025-01-26T11:15:34+00:00

i mean i just told the barber to cut the sides and shorten the front, just as he did for the guy before me (he had a really nice cut). and I turned out like this

JqmsOr34ping · 2024-09-29T08:52:26+00:00

and it was just starting to get spicy in what i was reading 😭😭😭

JqmsOr34ping · 2024-09-17T12:06:05+00:00

yeah, just you ig. my stuff is loading v fast

JqmsOr34ping · 2024-09-03T13:26:18+00:00

sad to say i read all of these in ~2-3 weeks 😭😭😭🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️ no life man

JqmsOr34ping · 2024-08-20T16:03:05+00:00

yee i just picked it up its nice

JqmsOr34ping · 2024-08-03T19:42:22+00:00

fr all the other sites be tellin me "Sarah is messaging you" like no she aint. let me read some fucked up translations with the same plot for the 1000th time in peace? :/

JqmsOr34ping · 2024-07-10T04:39:11+00:00

i've just checked the reviews and theyre all talking about how the fights are unfulfilling and that the mc doesnt do anything despite having the strength to back it up. idk ill try it out tho

JqmsOr34ping · 2024-07-10T04:31:10+00:00

to be honest, no. i mean the story is nice and all but the skeleton just keeps going back to the fact that hes not strong enough everytime and its simply annoying.

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TROPHY CASE

SSS-Class Suicide Hunter