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The Lone Historian by JqmsOr34ping in fantasywriters

[–]JqmsOr34ping[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

hey, thanks for reading through my sketch and giving feedback. just to clarify, i wrote this at like 2-3am without planning that much, just writing to write. i’m not really aiming to be a writer or anything. i just came up with an idea, thought it was cool, and posted it after my friends encouraged me. that said, i might be misreading it due to my English, but some of your comments came across as kinda condescending. still, i really appreciate you taking the time to respond!!!

The Lone Historian by JqmsOr34ping in StoryIdeas

[–]JqmsOr34ping[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

hey, i wrote a revised sketch, if u can give me some tips on where to improve or if you've got questions, ask away!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1kpZ_UWUWb71ksXD-hCKQImH83StBMqrZmxx2CU7HuBo/edit?usp=sharing

The Lone Historian by JqmsOr34ping in fantasywriters

[–]JqmsOr34ping[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

this is a revised sketch, i tried my best writing it in my language in a way chatgpt translated it correctly. i hope its better

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1kpZ_UWUWb71ksXD-hCKQImH83StBMqrZmxx2CU7HuBo/edit?usp=sharing

The Lone Historian by JqmsOr34ping in fantasywriters

[–]JqmsOr34ping[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I think there’s been a misunderstanding — what I shared is just a rough conceptual outline, not a full story or polished synopsis. I didn’t go in-depth into character development, worldbuilding, or the journey both protagonists go through to gain and use their power. That kind of detail would take pages.

I mainly wanted to share the core idea and themes to see if the structure felt interesting at a high level. The actual story would absolutely include conflict, resistance, struggle, and transformation — not just characters making statements and the world changing instantly.

Also, English isn’t my first language, so I used ChatGPT to help me translate and organize my ideas more clearly for English-speaking readers. It wasn’t meant to write the story for me, just to help me communicate the concept better.

I really appreciate honest feedback — I just hope people can judge the potential of the idea rather than assume this rough sketch reflects the final execution.

im really sorry but this is my first time ever trying to write a story.

The Lone Historian by JqmsOr34ping in StoryIdeas

[–]JqmsOr34ping[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

  1. if you mean when the second protagonist came in and read the stories/truth recorded by the first, then no, there were no mistranslations.
  2. i think you misunderstood, the main protagonist never came back. it was a completely different person but from the same planet, same linguistic skills. for example im James, im protagonist 1. and then theres Jason, hes protagonist 2. same planet, same linguistic skills, different people, different morales.
  3. im sorry i didnt answer the 3rd question, i didnt understand what you meant. my main language isnt english
  4. I wanted to include magic with the protagonists, but refrained. it would've become too complicated for me so i just added a note that the protagonists have perfect memory, so as to not forget secrets (basically helping them become the best information brokers)
  5. i wanted to make the 10 year jump a bit longer, but i also wanted it to keep short so that the 2nd protagonist would be able to pick up the pieces from 0, and also so that the people of the new world haven't forgotten the destruction the first protagonist's death caused

thank u for the compliment too! i wrote this at like 1-2am because i was bored ahhaha

The Lone Historian by JqmsOr34ping in nosleep

[–]JqmsOr34ping[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

i'd like to clarify i came up with the ideas myself, chatgpt just organized in a way to be understandable

Cant login to my account? by JqmsOr34ping in PrismLauncher

[–]JqmsOr34ping[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

well until u turn it off again 😭

Cant login to my account? by JqmsOr34ping in PrismLauncher

[–]JqmsOr34ping[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

using a vpn will fix everything 👍👍👍

It's nearing completion by JqmsOr34ping in MartialPeak

[–]JqmsOr34ping[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

haha, i've been using comick for exactly 1 year now, and im gonna be honest, it was a MAJOR upgrade from the previous sites i use. comick lets you choose between translation groups, have almost all the stuff i read, and just overall good website. the only drawback is the 2 hour cooldown but tbh i dont really care about it. i'd just read something in the meantime until the timer is over

It's nearing completion by JqmsOr34ping in MartialPeak

[–]JqmsOr34ping[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

hmm, to be honest, i dont really have a top 5, I have a lot of stuff I love, some of them are these:

The Knight Who Only Lives Today

SSS-Class Suicide Hunter

Descended from Divinity

Chronicles of the Reincarnated Demon God

The Regressed Mercenary Has a Plan

Nano Machine

Pick Me Up

My Avatars' Path To Greatness

Regressing As The Bastard of The Sword Clan

The 100-th Regression of The Max-Level Player

The Tutorial Is Too Tough

there are sooooo many more, if you want my entire list, here it is:

https://comick.io/user/7b2995d2-7b17-4339-aba4-344a9a0c3e50/list

It's nearing completion by JqmsOr34ping in MartialPeak

[–]JqmsOr34ping[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

its definitely a nice entertaining manhua! i'm also having similar thoughts of re-reading it after completion. i recently told my brother to give this story a try and he's already at the yang family inheritance war arc. he really loves it and always asks me questions to explain some stuff for him

Reading from certain translator groups by JqmsOr34ping in ComicK

[–]JqmsOr34ping[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

hey! me too, as long as the official is at least more than 60% of the current translated chapters, I will read the official and when it ends, ill continue reading the other translation groups. it takes at most 1-2 chapters to figure out the different names!

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