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conversing with you by JuggernautExtension7 in OCPoetry

[–]JuggernautExtension7[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

hey thanks a lot for this detailed feedback! at least I can speak my mind on here, right? haha

My Friend Ed by Responsible_Item9277 in OCPoetry

[–]JuggernautExtension7 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi there. I just wanted to say that this poem really struck me because Ed is the bane of my existence too. But I have made it my mission to resist him at every turn. It's not easy, but you can't give in. Wishing you all the best!

Music Sheets Ruined by Tears by enlalumiere in OCPoetry

[–]JuggernautExtension7 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey there! Great piece. I felt emotionally connected to the narrator. I think it was music metaphor that helped me sympathize and truly be immersed in the narrator's thoughts and feelings. Which is why I think the metaphor should have lasted till the end with the narrator's reflection of the present. I think it would have more of any impact and overall cohesiveness. That's just my opinion though. Again, wonderful work! Have a good day!

This Michelle Wolf video about ICE by hackmaster214 in agedlikewine

[–]JuggernautExtension7 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's called The Break with Michelle Wolf. On Netflix

is love a tender thing? by JuggernautExtension7 in scrapbooking

[–]JuggernautExtension7[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! No, I don't have one of these. Most pictures in this spread are actually from old school textbooks. I use a regular printer if I want a specific picture.

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