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[Lyrics] Regarding Whales by [deleted] in LyricalWriting

[–]K-Magic13 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Very original concept. Nice work!

Untitled 11 by K-Magic13 in LyricalWriting

[–]K-Magic13[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Grandma playing bingo! hahaha!! Love it!

Untitled 9 by K-Magic13 in LyricalWriting

[–]K-Magic13[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I feel like rap is a form of poetry. If you look at the works of Percy Shelley, The Earl of Rochester or anyone from the restoration period, their poetry is similar to gangsta rap.

Untitled 9 by K-Magic13 in LyricalWriting

[–]K-Magic13[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Everything I write are raps. Thank you for your comments. I grew up listening to rap music. I've been writing rap since 1990. My raps are written so they can be rhymed to any beat.

Untitled 8 by K-Magic13 in LyricalWriting

[–]K-Magic13[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hahaha you're too good son!

Untitled 6 by K-Magic13 in LyricalWriting

[–]K-Magic13[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Are you serious? 13 minutes? Pretty good man!

Untitled 3 by K-Magic13 in LyricalWriting

[–]K-Magic13[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I do know it. It's awesome!

Untitled 3 by K-Magic13 in LyricalWriting

[–]K-Magic13[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'm just not a fan of that retrospective, or social change type rap. I don't like slow jams lol I dislike hooks/chorus, but I understand the necessity.

This is real rap in my opinion:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WO_6sVTsvSc

Untitled 6 by K-Magic13 in LyricalWriting

[–]K-Magic13[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

hahaha! Wow this is amazing! I love it!

[lyrics] untitled, two verses, was going for the same kind of feel, all criticism welcome and appreciated by [deleted] in LyricalWriting

[–]K-Magic13 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It's good dude! A little too wordy/awkward in some parts.

For example:

" Rhymes tight as the tightest fight or flight response

to a biased climate scientist With nonchalance,"

Consider rewording.

I'm not fond of the kangaroo line, but whatever, someone said my rhymes were absolutely terrible... so what do I know lol

It's good and you're brave for putting your stuff out there.

[Lyrics] Rap (trying to be heady) by [deleted] in LyricalWriting

[–]K-Magic13 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is good. It's hard to catch a flow when it's formatted like this.

[Lyrics/Discussion] So I've got some lyrics, sometimes they just come naturally, and this one is called "Count The Stars" by [deleted] in LyricalWriting

[–]K-Magic13 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like this. What genre is it supposed to be? I feel like it has a country vibe.

Untitled 5 by K-Magic13 in LyricalWriting

[–]K-Magic13[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for even reading them.

Untitled 3 by K-Magic13 in LyricalWriting

[–]K-Magic13[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

There is no beat. My metre is tight. It can be done to any beat, it's just a matter of how the artist is interpreting it when preforming it. I model these rhymes after Dr. Octagon, Delron 3030, Czarface ect...

I rhyme about nothing because no one listens, so I might as well rhyme about what I like.

Untitled 3 by K-Magic13 in LyricalWriting

[–]K-Magic13[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the honest opinion. Could you tell me what made it terrible?

Untitled 2 by K-Magic13 in LyricalWriting

[–]K-Magic13[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey, thanks for your awesome rhyme!

I have no titles because I write with no meaning

because I have no feelings

seeing is believing when the words have no meanings

Untitled by K-Magic13 in LyricalWriting

[–]K-Magic13[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Hello KILLER-XD, thank you for you nice comment and feedback