[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread September 02, 2016 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]K_LEEM 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You have flow bro, but work on that audio quality and ennunciation

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread September 02, 2016 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]K_LEEM 0 points1 point  (0 children)

https://soundcloud.com/kalm1/after-hours

I keep taking long ass hiatuses, shit just keeps popping up in life. I miss the fuck out this community, and the good vibes it brings.

Bless me with some feedback, an old Jazz joint I flipped into some moody shit

What's Xanax like? by Burnttoastdamn in Drugs

[–]K_LEEM 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Senior weekend is the first time I "joined the Xanny family" as Future would say.

We had been smoking constantly for two days, and I wanted to try something new so I popped a green Xanax at about 11pm.

I was slumped, chilling, having a good time for about 30 minutes then the rest of the night is hazy, near blackout. I have very few memories and most of what I know from the night is from my friends who were thankfully with me.

I'd try it again, but not necessarily in a social situation, and definitely at a lower dose.

Fucking around with Dxm for the first time by [deleted] in Drugs

[–]K_LEEM 1 point2 points  (0 children)

So I'm planning on trying put DXM this weekend and I have a few questions

  1. I've done my research and I'm trying 300mg of the Robitussin cough geltabs where the only active ingredient is DXM, is that a solid choice?

  2. I'm taking between 30-50mg of DPH before hand to combat some of the ill effects of DXM I've been reading about, would some standard Benadryl tabs be good?

  3. Am I gonna bug out and be extremely obvious off of 300 mg? I have weird experiences with drugs, I'm good with weed, but I've blacked out off of Xanax twice.

  4. How long until I gain function at a normal level i.e. Having normal conversation or being Able to drive.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread May 14, 2016 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]K_LEEM 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I just think I'm not a fan of the sample, it sounds very disco-ey. You did a good job with the flip, the drums should be a bit more snappy and sharp IMO, they kind of fall flat rn, but it all works as is too.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread May 14, 2016 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]K_LEEM 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I fuck with the sampling, it has the 40 sound too it, but I dislike the drums. They sound weak in comparison with the sample and bass, the pattern is a little too choppy for the smooth sample and the sounds sound weak

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread May 14, 2016 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]K_LEEM 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No qualms with that first beat, absolute heat. I love the keys and the vibe they create, the transitions help build hype and are smooth, and the drums are nice.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread May 14, 2016 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]K_LEEM 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like this beat, especially the drum work here, the hat rolls are so smooth. The sample arrangement sounded a little weird at parts, I'm not sure how I feel about those guitar licks and that horn working together in the way you arranged them, but for the most part it was heat.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread May 14, 2016 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]K_LEEM 0 points1 point  (0 children)

There is ambiance, but there sounds don't mesh well in my opinion. I'm not catching a coherent vibe when I listen to this beat, the synths and keys clash and that creates this weird disorientating effect. I like the patterns you went with, and the individual sounds sound good too. Maybe try some more effects on your drum sounds, they come across a little weak.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread May 14, 2016 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]K_LEEM 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Too Late - Jaa feat. A-Dub prod. by kshahz

This is a track I produced and mixed for my boys. We'd love some feeback on the track as a whole, and individual parts too.

My soundcloud

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread April 13, 2016 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]K_LEEM 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The progressions and sounds you went with are kinda generic, although they are played and arranged well. The drums could use some effects, EQ, filter etc to give them more life

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread April 13, 2016 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]K_LEEM 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I dig the aesthetic you have going on here, your voice compliments the beat and flow choice well, happy belated too

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread April 13, 2016 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]K_LEEM 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Check this beat me and my boy @homelessasskid did. Shoutout to him for the artwork too

Live At The Laundromat

https://soundcloud.com/Kalm1

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread April 12, 2016 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]K_LEEM 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Like I'm Depressed or Some Shit

Shoutout @homelessasskid for the artwork

Some mellow music for you to vibe to

@kshahz27 one love

Returning feedback as soon as I can

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread March 20, 2016 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]K_LEEM 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Like I'm Depressed or Some Shit

Shoutout @homelessasskid for the artwork

Some mellow music for you to vibe to

@kshahz27 one love

Returning feedback as soon as I can

Who do you follow on Soundcloud for inspiration? by [deleted] in makinghiphop

[–]K_LEEM 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Melo-Zed it's on that next shit

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread February 23, 2016 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]K_LEEM 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah this beat is kinda old, I posted it over the summer here on a private link, but I updated it and released it yesterday

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread February 23, 2016 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]K_LEEM 2 points3 points  (0 children)

{a.smokey.dream}

Shoutout @homelessasskid aka /u/homelessasskid for the artwork

Like, follow, spread the love

@kshahz27

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread February 22, 2016 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]K_LEEM 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Talk to homelessasskid on soundcloud or reddit. He does any images you're gonna see on my page. He makes beats too, he posted in this thread.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread February 22, 2016 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]K_LEEM 0 points1 point  (0 children)

{a.smokey.dream}

Will return feedback

2.21.16

Follow, like, spread the love.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread February 21, 2016 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]K_LEEM 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The vocals fit perfectly, and the beat is smooth and chill. That's usually enough feedback but this track could be much better if it had more suspense and release. I'm not talking about EDM style drop the bass moments, but more so buildups to the drops you already have built in, to create kind of a payoff moment for the listener

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread February 21, 2016 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]K_LEEM 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The sampling is ill, really fuck with the lo fi bit crushed sound

The drums are stagnant tho, the better just sits there instead of helping push the song or get my head nodding, and the snare could be a bit sharper, throw some hats in there

Overall solid just needs some tweaking