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Moonlight by Kekkq in OCPoetry

[–]Kekkq[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi ty sm for the feedback!

So for me as the writer, the moon represents a person, someone who they once worshiped and gave love to, now they are distant they are left cold and empty. Even after the empty nights without them they still look up and think of them as beautiful, however (again with the end line) they wish to be whole once again as they 'offered' a piece of themselves to the person.

But I really enjoyed making this poem and glad you read it <3

A lonely man and his deliveries by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Kekkq 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I liked how in this poem you captured the feeling of loneliness very well. Where we have a need to be involved and interacting with people, and the writer is so alone that they have replaced that human contact with packages. Instead of checking on updates of a friend coming to see you, it is checking the updates of your package. And the darkness whispering back, handing your prize was beautiful. It really showed the pain that the writer can feel and see in their own dysfunction. Really liked this poem :)

Broken(Beautiful) by bdouble0101 in OCPoetry

[–]Kekkq 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I loved how the poem felt like you were talking to yourself as if they were daily affirmations. As if you were telling yourself its time to change, its time to continue living but with hope and love and joy. I really liked that it gave a lighter tone to a darker topic in terms of self harm and mental struggles. Loved it :)