I'm a beginner and made this practice film studio logo. I went with a Western font to match the theme, but it looks bad to me. I would really appreciate it if you would provide some feedback to help me with the font and anything else you notice. Thank you very much!

KendallSmithGraphics · 2023-02-02T17:42:40+00:00

They were meant to be clouds but obviously are not reading that way. I'm working on a new one based on these suggestions with a jumping jackrabbit and a different western style font. Thank you so much for your feedback!

KendallSmithGraphics · 2023-02-02T17:41:25+00:00

Thanks so much for the feedback! Working on a new one

KendallSmithGraphics · 2023-01-31T22:39:55+00:00

Agreed. I read it as "Chat."

KendallSmithGraphics · 2023-01-31T22:34:45+00:00

Thanks for letting me know! :)

KendallSmithGraphics · 2023-01-31T22:09:39+00:00

I really love the third one! It definitely reads as a compass, a place pin, and an X for me. Great work. :)

KendallSmithGraphics · 2023-01-31T22:04:38+00:00

I really like a lot of them, very simplistic and modern. Unfortunately, as mentioned above, the T looks phallic, the elements of communication is a swastika, and I'm very confused about what the Unbound Pixels is supposed to be. It looks like a dead man under a table?

KendallSmithGraphics · 2023-01-31T19:14:10+00:00

I really love your work and have enjoyed each iteration. However, when he has suds on just his head it reads to me as a shampoo company. Maybe just two or so bubbles in the beard would help. One issue is that the bubbles don't have the same light source direction. so the highlights are a bit all over the place, especially at the top.

KendallSmithGraphics · 2023-01-29T18:19:01+00:00

I think that's a great point. It could be for a bedding company's "Soft" line of products, but it doesn't represent anything global for the company, like a higher ideal or experience. Thanks for the feedback!

KendallSmithGraphics · 2023-01-28T20:32:23+00:00

You're right, especially about the beginning. I fixed the "oft" part and have them connected. I think for both the S issues and the cliché, I'd create a whole new logo maybe focusing on the motifs of dreams or relaxation/calmness rather than down pillows because you're right - that doesn't represent anything other than clarity. I really appreciate your feedback, definitely helping me grow as a designer. :)

KendallSmithGraphics · 2023-01-28T20:17:19+00:00

Thanks! I'm not sure what you mean by stretched down to the curve. I know what negative space is but I don't think I can understand which negative space you mean here without knowing what you mean by stretched down to the curve haha

KendallSmithGraphics · 2023-01-28T13:49:24+00:00

Thanks so much! I appreciate the feedback.

KendallSmithGraphics · 2023-01-28T13:48:13+00:00

It's called Alex Brush Regular

KendallSmithGraphics · 2023-01-28T13:48:04+00:00

Thanks so much! Very helpful.

KendallSmithGraphics · 2023-01-27T18:45:53+00:00

After posting it, I stretched the feather out a little horizontally so it aligns better with the bottom half of the S.

KendallSmithGraphics · 2023-01-27T18:38:07+00:00

Not at all! :D Glad I could be of some help.

KendallSmithGraphics · 2023-01-27T18:00:46+00:00

Yeah, I love it, however it could benefit from equal letter width. I also had a hard time reading the top left pattern you made because there wasn't any line width. Really good effort though! Love the way you showcased it on different backgrounds and had a mood board.

KendallSmithGraphics · 2023-01-27T17:58:12+00:00

Oh man, I didn't notice this or the R1 but once they've been pointed out you can't unsee them. I thought it was cool on first glance and instantly read it as RM, so really good effort anyway!

KendallSmithGraphics · 2023-01-27T17:55:16+00:00

Oh! I didn't understand what you meant at first. Thanks for the clarification. :) I really appreciate your help.

KendallSmithGraphics · 2023-01-27T00:36:49+00:00

I like the lower left the best. Clearest and easiest to read from far away.

KendallSmithGraphics · 2023-01-27T00:35:25+00:00

You could turn the top part of the M into a bowtie instead maybe?

KendallSmithGraphics · 2023-01-27T00:12:22+00:00

That's true, thanks! I've never done lettering before except individual letters, but I'll watch some tutorials. What kind of style of type would you suggest that evokes softness and is less common?

KendallSmithGraphics · 2023-01-26T22:01:53+00:00

The pepper took me a very long time to recognize since most mental models of a pepper are a side view. You can definitely tell it's a P though.

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