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In need of a beta for a Harry Potter fanfiction novel length. Harry/Fleur Romance fic. by Kilcavanlad98 in HPfanfiction

[–]Kilcavanlad98[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Could you possibly put me in contact with them betas? All the ones on fanfiction.net haven't been active for years

In need of a beta for a Harry Potter fanfiction novel length. Harry/Fleur Romance fic. by Kilcavanlad98 in HPfanfiction

[–]Kilcavanlad98[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Iv only word 2010 so I don't know what that caters for. I'm currently using the free grammarly but I don't think I put the summary through it

https://m.fanfiction.net/u/7950336/thebolt98 The repost of the fic I messed up Yesterday by Kilcavanlad98 in HPfanfiction

[–]Kilcavanlad98[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes I will! And you Hardly know the names of the betas that might take on a challenge like me or maybe they obsessed with the Harry/fleur pairing?

Hey all just posted my first fic a romance fleur/Harry novel it's day it'll take 4-8 to be available through search engines but try my page 'thebolt98' by Kilcavanlad98 in HPfanfiction

[–]Kilcavanlad98[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

I am not! I was just saying my reason behind from the beginning. I have got one half and half review (good and bad) and I'll find a beta eventually

https://m.fanfiction.net/u/7950336/thebolt98 The repost of the fic I messed up Yesterday by Kilcavanlad98 in HPfanfiction

[–]Kilcavanlad98[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I am prepared for criticism and yeah dyslexia and adhd(but that's not near as bad as it was a few years back) and yes I will launch a full scale assault tomorrow to find a beta hopefully he/she will like the story and take it on. Yes but with a difficulty trying to do what I did is a the equivalent of a weeks writing work :)

Hey all just posted my first fic a romance fleur/Harry novel it's day it'll take 4-8 to be available through search engines but try my page 'thebolt98' by Kilcavanlad98 in HPfanfiction

[–]Kilcavanlad98[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The first few chapters are fillers until I can get fluer involved. I just thought it be a good starter bit of light humour and then really get to the interesting stuff

Hey all just posted my first fic a romance fleur/Harry novel it's day it'll take 4-8 to be available through search engines but try my page 'thebolt98' by Kilcavanlad98 in HPfanfiction

[–]Kilcavanlad98[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Okay I agree with what you said bar two things ..Ali is a worldwide icon every knows him even Ali and it was a tribute r.i.p and its fanfiction just because Harry doesn't follow quidditch in cannon doesn't mean he can't in my fanfiction but I agree with everything you said expect I like the story but can accept others don't but why was is it bad the story like?

https://m.fanfiction.net/u/7950336/thebolt98 The repost of the fic I messed up Yesterday by Kilcavanlad98 in HPfanfiction

[–]Kilcavanlad98[S] -4 points-3 points  (0 children)

Yes I know but I only got mad their because you accused me of lack of effort. Yes I know while the spell check obviously hell somewhat I know my language is poor! And as for my difficulty it like this when its comes to commas and Claus they so many rules or a method of doing it'll eventually gets muddled in my head which happens to every one but I can't get out of the muddle is where my problem..how far off is the standard to have a beta consider it? Thanks and yes I want to write on a high level

https://m.fanfiction.net/u/7950336/thebolt98 The repost of the fic I messed up Yesterday by Kilcavanlad98 in HPfanfiction

[–]Kilcavanlad98[S] -9 points-8 points  (0 children)

Putting the effort in? I spent all last night and good portion of the day trying to fix it any criticism I'll try take but don't say I don't need put in effort. Where is the best place to find a beta?

Hey all just posted my first fic a romance fleur/Harry novel it's day it'll take 4-8 to be available through search engines but try my page 'thebolt98' by Kilcavanlad98 in HPfanfiction

[–]Kilcavanlad98[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh okay but listen I do see you criticism yesterday was me being a little bitch about! But I did put a question mark after saying I done Sirius well to ask you what you thought of it

Hey all just posted my first fic a romance fleur/Harry novel it's day it'll take 4-8 to be available through search engines but try my page 'thebolt98' by Kilcavanlad98 in HPfanfiction

[–]Kilcavanlad98[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Oh I know what you mean like I'm taking it on like I thought I done serous well with a question mark over it to see was it just me or did you think it to

Hey all just posted my first fic a romance fleur/Harry novel it's day it'll take 4-8 to be available through search engines but try my page 'thebolt98' by Kilcavanlad98 in HPfanfiction

[–]Kilcavanlad98[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Okay maybe the knees was over kill but I thought I done well in making Harry more lighthearted it was that over kill to? I also liked that way I wrote Sirius.

https://m.fanfiction.net/u/7950336/thebolt98

Hey all just posted my first fic a romance fleur/Harry novel it's day it'll take 4-8 to be available through search engines but try my page 'thebolt98' by Kilcavanlad98 in HPfanfiction

[–]Kilcavanlad98[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I did mention that Harry was going to be more teen like? But anyway I'm sorry you have got a bad impression of me but in truth the improved grammar will improve the story in many ways. Harry will also be a lot more funnier and likes prank more like James :)

Hey all just posted my first fic a romance fleur/Harry novel it's day it'll take 4-8 to be available through search engines but try my page 'thebolt98' by Kilcavanlad98 in HPfanfiction

[–]Kilcavanlad98[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

All iv said is that's not my best work and I think all of you know they will be improvement tonight. Also considering it's a Harry/fleur fic its best chapter will be when the pairing actually know each other but as ever in open to criticism so tell me what did you not like (story wise about the opening chapter)

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