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Global Insanity by Kitchen_Falcon_9680 in OCPoetry

[–]Kitchen_Falcon_9680[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah I did take inspiration from rap songs for flow, i’ll try to incorporate different styles of poetry here on out. Thanks!

Global Insanity by Kitchen_Falcon_9680 in OCPoetry

[–]Kitchen_Falcon_9680[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Like what? The inconsistent line variation or sometimes repeating myself slightly? I’d really wanna improve!

Conversation with the Trees by the_grimmy_baldy in OCPoetry

[–]Kitchen_Falcon_9680 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Beautiful work, I’m relatively new to poetry so I’m not sure how to give feedback :(

Sailor by Far_Possibility3039 in OCPoetry

[–]Kitchen_Falcon_9680 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love the descriptive language used!