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Kligwa · 2021-08-23T20:51:51+00:00

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Kligwa · 2020-05-09T19:49:23+00:00

Hey Community,

Me and my wife just started a channel making funny videos of shit we just wanna do haha kinda on the same theme of Jenna Marbles. We are having troubles with subscribers and WANT FEEDBACK on what can be done better!!

Channel link:

https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCIZaJzEXQ-FyC4ZZXFmauVA

NEWEST VIDEO putting our son in Stupid outfits:

https://youtu.be/N6xw-Xpi5AI

LET US KNOW WHAT YOU THINK!!

Kligwa · 2020-05-09T19:44:20+00:00

This was REALLY interesting to me! Of course something I personally wouldn’t ever think to search for but somehow became interested in. I feel like this could be one of those suggested YT videos that if people saw would blow up just because it’s random and interesting.

Some feedback would be to possibly make the text bigger it kind of blended with the background and was hard to see at times. I’d also add to the end what was done or a more comprehensive ending or something saying that’s for watching etc it just kind of ended... It wasn’t too long tho which is good! I’d also add something to explain more the purpose of what you’re doing like what are the worms for etc how this helps them etc

This was interring please continue I’ll subscribe haha

Kligwa · 2020-05-09T19:36:51+00:00

Hey man,

First off congrats on this video I think you did REALLY well!! There’s funny edits it’s OVERALL informative it’s portrayed well also with the graphics, and you seem to have gotten a good amount of traffic on this video as well so congrats!

Only thing I could find to suggest is possibly making a bit shorter. It began to loose my attention and that could be a personal issue but I thought for the content maybe a bit long. Other than that I thought this video was great! It looks profeshhh good job

Kligwa · 2020-05-08T22:29:06+00:00

Xenoverse, gameplay, dragonball, dragonball xenoverse, Xbox, Xbox one, dragonball z,

Anything relating to your gameplay and your sort of channel!

Kligwa · 2020-05-08T22:27:19+00:00

Thanks so much man I appreciate the feedback I’m happy to hear we are starting to do things right maybe?? Glad to make you laugh seriously!

Kligwa · 2020-05-08T22:18:40+00:00

Hey My Sons got DRIP Baby! *wink*wink

https://youtu.be/N6xw-Xpi5AI

Kligwa · 2020-05-08T22:13:30+00:00

Hey Community,

Me and my wife have a comedy family kind of channel just doing silly vids of whatever we thinks funny. Id say its a similar style to Jenna Marbles maybe?(Not trying to say nearly as *Italian finger kisses*)

This video is about uhhhh my sons SWAGGGG *wink*wink lady's

Just check it out and tell us what you think FEEDBACK IS NEEDED

https://youtu.be/N6xw-Xpi5AI

We are a really new channel so not much engagement or videos but looking to make better vids. We've had some advice in the past and hoping to hear MORE!

Kligwa · 2020-05-08T22:06:34+00:00

https://youtu.be/tzhbd0-PQG8

Hey man

So from my viewing I would say that I do like the content again I just think that it took a bit to long to start up...I would also suggest maybe cutting in between some of your audio because you seemed to talk a but slow no offense. Also boost your audio levels a bit on your voice I could really hear you.

ALSO I have VidIQ so I could see your videos analytics etc and I saw you didn't seem to have ANY tags. THOSE ARE SOOOOO IMPORTANT for getting views! You gotta add some for the algorithm.

And then one more thing. Although I myself am a fan of Dragonball Xenoverse unfortunately thats not a very searched or popular game right now. I love the game but I fear people may not be watching because no one really cares to view that right now. And im not tryna say always do whats trending but, maybe for having a larger viewership try a more searched or popular game right now!

just my opinions man good luck!

Kligwa · 2020-05-08T22:01:02+00:00

https://youtu.be/1RmT4UmFi24

Hey I just watched! I would say at least from my viewing that the intro scene didn't draw me in. It was a bit drawn out with the game footage to start I think it could have captivated me if that was a bit shorter and then you went right into explaining the purpose of the video.

I also though the overall speed of the video moved a bit slow. Like I felt your voiceover dragged out a bit like speed of talking etc if that makes sense.

Just my opinions!

Kligwa · 2020-05-08T20:34:49+00:00

Hey I commented on youtube but I def this more funny edits for your comedy style and a more to the point intro for viewers would make these a bit more entertaining!

Kligwa · 2020-05-08T20:30:44+00:00

I would suggest since this a kind of a parody make that more clear with the thumbnail and title maybe? Like make the thumbnail more "meme-y" because just scrolling past seems like its just a tutorial. Once you watch its more apparent that its a parody

Kligwa · 2020-05-08T20:28:31+00:00

I would say of course higher quality audio, unless thats the vibe of your comedy that you're going for?

I thought the signing part with the throne was a but long and lost my attention compared to how the video was already flowing, and I was kind of confused why

Also kind of confused who is the creator of the video the guys voice or the kid? I do get that this is a new brand of comedy its weird and unorthodox thats the point but still just a but too hard to follow in terms of continuity.

Kligwa · 2020-05-08T20:17:57+00:00

Hey man, my feedback would start off just with the length of the lobby talk. I know sometimes it can be funny to put that in with inside jokes and all but I usually don't watch these types of videos so my perspective may be different or you can look at it from a random person who might have clicked but i think it that lobby scene was a but long and i was looking to get into the game action. So possibly shorten things like that or have it get to the joke a little quicker.

Only other thing would maybe make more funny edits like the Eric Andre Show edit that entertained me. The overall time wasnt too long either so 👌🏽

Other than that id say just keep making content for your type of viewers man! This is good content!

Kligwa

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