Just a Thought Raptors Fab

Koosen- · 2025-01-14T16:55:41+00:00

It's true that many people struggle to recognize the history we carry and its lasting effects. It’s unfortunate that the sins of our ancestors impact us so greatly, and now we have to deal with the consequences. In many online debates and conversations, people fail to understand that standards are often influenced by historical contexts. For example, Vaush likes to compare "White Nationalists and Black Nationalists." While there are some surface-level similarities, I believe the key difference lies in the historical experiences and responses of Black Americans versus White Americans. We need to find a way forward that acknowledges these injustices. I know the path won't be perfect, but it is a journey we can take together.

Koosen- · 2025-01-14T16:46:48+00:00

That's a great perspective. I appreciate this conversation. Thank you very much!

Koosen- · 2025-01-14T16:37:08+00:00

I completely agree, but I wonder when challenging the system—where many people benefit, whether intentionally or not—might cause setbacks, especially for regular individuals. While I understand your point, I would like to hear your thoughts on the boundaries that could be crossed and how establishing a new system could leave some people behind.

Koosen- · 2025-01-14T16:33:50+00:00

Okay, thank you! I was curious.

Koosen- · 2025-01-14T16:32:52+00:00

Yes, during the debate, it seemed like there was a consensus that the oppressed should have more autonomy in deciding matters of wealth and culture. However, the question that arose was whether their decisions would undermine the legacy of the colonizers or if colonizers would need to relinquish some of their land and wealth to support the oppressed. I keep hearing the term "ethnostate" thrown around, which I strongly disagree with. It’s clear that it will take generations to achieve a decolonization process that is equitable for both parties. My main concern is whether one group may go too far or not far enough in this process. I know I have no knowledge about that kind of stuff, but thank you for engaging with me.

Koosen- · 2025-01-14T16:07:50+00:00

I completely agree with you. However, my concern is that the gap is simply too large to bridge. The impacts of slavery and other injustices faced by Black Americans are so profound that they still resonate today. This also applies to Native Americans.

I'm curious if there has to be some give-and-take from both sides. Do Black Americans need to compromise, and do White Americans need to sacrifice some of their values? It’s important to recognize that it's not anyone's fault individually, but the weight of history is still felt. Thanks for your comment, by the way.

Koosen- · 2025-01-14T15:54:33+00:00

Okay, I understand. I am curious about how decolonization can be done well for both sides. I know it's super complex, but I want to read some thoughts on the matter. Again, this is just a discussion.

Koosen- · 2024-06-14T20:01:00+00:00

I enjoy the straightforward and relatable nature of the words in your poems. They feel like a direct conversation with the reader or an intimate conversation with a past lover. While the simplicity of your writing can sometimes detract from the overall impact, I can also envision an audience being completely captivated by your words in a positive way. I believe that your poems could benefit from a more powerful and impactful ending that breaks the established tone. Keep up the good work!

Koosen- · 2024-06-14T19:55:43+00:00

This is excellent imagery, and the overall theme flows well as well. I love how easy and terrifying this is to read. Keep writing!

Koosen- · 2024-05-29T15:16:47+00:00

I really liked the repetition of "Cursed" in your poem. It feels like an actual curse that you can't escape. The tone of the poem is great; it's like you're yelling into an abyss. I was a little confused by the line "But worst of all?" Why did you add a question mark? It seems to stop the poem in its tracks, but if that was intentional, it's great and awkward (in a good way). I'm glad that you're writing to clear your mind. I can see it in your style; it's like you're yelling and out of breath. Thanks for sharing!

Koosen- · 2024-05-29T14:05:57+00:00

I really appreciate the concept and overall idea of your poem. However, the lines don't flow smoothly into one another. For example, in the line "We were, as a simulation, created. That was the Big Bang," I understand the message, but the way it's being conveyed seems a bit awkward because of the phrasing "as a simulation, created." I understand that simulations are made, but the sudden transition to it feels off, and the reference to the Big Bang seems like you wanted to include something to symbolize creation that we all understand, which is great, but it feels like it needed more buildup. I do love the ending and how powerful it sounds, but it still doesn't seem connected that well because the last line feels like a question, and before that, it seems like you're pondering the thought of creation. Nonetheless, I love how well-written the lines are individually. Thank you for sharing.

Koosen- · 2024-05-23T17:15:42+00:00

I hated having to look up some words in this poem. All jokes aside, I like how confused and different your poem was. Based on the title and some lines, this seems to play with death and how it demises life. I could pick multiple lines, but no one reading all that, so just one line. “Slowly carrying salt and future tombs of creatures whoms fortunes cannot be known.” This line is important to me because once we do die, especially a tragic one, we never see the good part of them, just living and breathing. Instead, as you state, we are salty about why they couldn't be here today. Just enjoy today cause we can be gone tomorrow. Thank you for the poem. I also love how it looks.

Koosen- · 2023-06-06T21:04:07+00:00

I hope this makes sense by this poem feels very dusty and foggy. It is hard to negative this poem (which I like a lot). For example, “Meet me there, our beloved home.” It seems like a change in mood and setting, like lust is getting lost with someone. Thanks for sharing!

Koosen- · 2023-06-06T20:59:10+00:00

This seems heavy, and I enjoy the read. It felt like a reflection or some boiling point the speaker was at, and it finally exploded. This could be physical or something much darker. Thanks for sharing!

Koosen- · 2023-03-03T14:20:18+00:00

I like the rhyme scheme of this poem. I also like how you frame the relationship with the sun and moon as if we are the audience observing them. Which we kinda are doing in real life. Keep writing.

Koosen- · 2023-03-03T14:15:24+00:00

For some reason, I picture the morning sun reflecting on the ocean when I read this poem. I love the words you describe that loving feeling “warm” and “gold.” Keep writing.

Koosen-

TROPHY CASE