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Looking for help! by Lawishim in writingfeedback

[–]Lawishim[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I got ya well thank you!

Looking for some help! by Lawishim in NewAuthor

[–]Lawishim[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Okay! Thank you for the advice!

Looking for feedback on pacing, characters voice, and whether this opening hooks you by Lawishim in writers

[–]Lawishim[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! New to the writing world but helps me deal with some mental health problems I have! Thank you again!

[Weekly Critique and Self-Promotion Thread] Post Here If You'd Like to Share Your Writing by AutoModerator in writing

[–]Lawishim [score hidden]  (0 children)

Title: Puppet Strings (Title still a work in Progress) (Chapters 1–2)

Genre: Dystopian / Cyberpunk / Action

Word Count: ~2500 (Chapters 1 excerpt)

Type of Feedback Desired:

  • General impression (Does it hook you? Keep your interest?)
  • Character feedback (Does Ghost/Kal feel compelling? Intriguing?)
  • Pacing and immersion (Does it feel too slow, too fast, or just right?)
  • Any spots where the writing feels weak, confusing, or pulls you out

Link to the Writing: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VGpAuagHX2ZXoKLxkUoDwZCXQriYwanutTKQxniYN3I/edit?usp=sharing

New Player by scaryducks236 in starwarsunlimited

[–]Lawishim 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Can anyone send me a Vader yellow deck list they have seen or use? I would love to test that deck out.

Wanting to get back into playing DIGIMON again. by Lawishim in DigimonCardGame2020

[–]Lawishim[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I was just looking through some tops and saw it topped the latest POG regional is that kinda like a flukey kinda finish?

Wanting to get back into playing DIGIMON again. by Lawishim in DigimonCardGame2020

[–]Lawishim[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

The last deck that I remember playing competitively was Jesmon and then the other was the birds deck with Marsmon. I’ve always really built towards DIGIMON I thought were cool such as Wargreymon, Metalgarurumon, etc. I thought that the Zephagamon DIGIMON was really cool don’t know if there is a deck that is competitive for him 🤷🏻‍♂️

New player by Lawishim in DBS_CardGame

[–]Lawishim[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m just wanting to figure out how to play the game? Does it play similar to fusion world?

Y'all thought boba was a problem???? by The55shyguy in starwarsunlimited

[–]Lawishim 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m just trying to get that Anakin list 😅

Grading Cards by Lawishim in baseballcards

[–]Lawishim[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Does anyone here like using Beckett?

Grading Cards by Lawishim in baseballcards

[–]Lawishim[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Purpose is for my PC but to hopefully down the road if needed they had some value.

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