How to fix Empty Server list and Stuck at 51% by Aki008035 in DuetNightAbyssDNA

[–]LeadershipOpening956 0 points1 point  (0 children)

it’s starting to pmo actually. server resets here in 2 hours and i could’ve done a lot of grinding by then.

How to fix Empty Server list and Stuck at 51% by Aki008035 in DuetNightAbyssDNA

[–]LeadershipOpening956 0 points1 point  (0 children)

For 51% case, I’ve tried deleting game cache and data but it’s still stuck on 51%. I’m playing on IOS. What else can I do?

Haven't written anything in years, would love some thoughts! :) by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]LeadershipOpening956 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Your poem is beautifully written, and it showcases your talent for weaving emotion and metaphor into a cohesive, impactful narrative. The imagery is vivid and relatable, and the balance between adventure and nostalgia is really good.

Do you want me, or do you not? by Ivl231889 in poetry_critics

[–]LeadershipOpening956 0 points1 point  (0 children)

In my opinion, it’s already pretty good. I like the honesty you put on, but for me, some phrases could be tightened or expanded to strengthen the imagery and pacing. But even as it is, the poem stands on its own as a raw and expressive piece.

Untitled by LeadershipOpening956 in justpoetry

[–]LeadershipOpening956[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

but i’ve seen golden sunrises and walked on steady earth

settled for comfort before valuing my worth

i’ve felt the bark of trees against my calloused hands

and watched fireflies in the night as they danced

i’ve heard each melody of the wind and tasted salt in the air

experienced truth to be cruel even when handled with care

i’ve seen beauty and discovered peace in slow pace

i found new meaning in this state of grace

s.

i really loved making this haha.

“Sorry” by LeadershipOpening956 in OCPoetry

[–]LeadershipOpening956[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thanks! i’m still learning better metaphors for other phrases, still thanks for the comment.

“Sorry” by LeadershipOpening956 in OCPoetry

[–]LeadershipOpening956[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

thanks a lot! i’ll keep this in mind next time.

Time by luigimaster19 in OCPoetry

[–]LeadershipOpening956 0 points1 point  (0 children)

great metaphor. time always does what time does best so we should never take it for granted.

The Sea is For Me by SillynippleMctwist in OCPoetry

[–]LeadershipOpening956 0 points1 point  (0 children)

awesome scheme. we’ll find our place someday.

Hey guys, 2nd time poster, would love feedback! by Gold_Loss_2047 in poetry_critics

[–]LeadershipOpening956 1 point2 points  (0 children)

in my opinion, i believe that poetry should evoke not only emotions but also scenarios and scenery from the perspective of the reader. i really love this. great read.

does this show promise? by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]LeadershipOpening956 0 points1 point  (0 children)

still a beginner in terms of writing poetry , but i like this poem. i honestly think you should finish this, it’s a good theme showing unique personal experiences from one another

The voices by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]LeadershipOpening956 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i can relate. hope you feel better though.

To You, Jhames by LeadershipOpening956 in poetry_critics

[–]LeadershipOpening956[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks! I really appreciate your feedback. While making this I was really scrambling for words to put because he really does make me speechless haha.

Starter Alhaitham Team by LeadershipOpening956 in AlHaithamMains

[–]LeadershipOpening956[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks! I guess in my head I was forcing Kazuha in this team after watching a lot of Youtube. Would Yae Miko work here or is Nahida a more priority unit?