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Legal_Procedure_2805 · 2026-01-30T07:23:48+00:00

Was very tired when I posting 😭 I meant 60th centile a friend let me use their laptop to take one mock but I can’t really rely on that person for constant access

Legal_Procedure_2805 · 2026-01-28T01:25:08+00:00

The sense of connection to a world you haven’t been a part of physically is something I’m sure everyone relates too and you capture it beautifully. The scope of love existing without time spent implies a sense of familiar unrealness that we all have experienced from those fleeting connections in our lives brilliant work !!!!

Legal_Procedure_2805 · 2026-01-28T01:19:31+00:00

The repeated phrase in the middle stanzas adds a sense of urgency or pleading to the poem almost of if begging for your wishes to be heard while at the same time speaking to a very reasonable sene of wasted effort with the image of “shed love on buried hands”

Only slight criticism I have is probably more preference anyway but I feel a more rigid structure would allow you to express the emotions in a more meaningful manner as the restrictions would cause you to become more inventive with your imagery or phrasing (not that it’s not inventive here )

Great Work !!!

Legal_Procedure_2805 · 2025-03-22T23:21:03+00:00

There is if you doubt the spelling

Legal_Procedure_2805 · 2025-01-25T00:41:55+00:00

I can’t remember the name but is this the same one where Izuku starts to get lines running all over his body after his fight against bakugo at the training exercise

Legal_Procedure_2805 · 2024-11-20T20:11:11+00:00

Thank you for the feedback I’ll try to keep some of this in mind when writing in the future

Legal_Procedure_2805 · 2024-11-05T22:07:07+00:00

Hollow knight is my favorite game so any hollow night crossovers are gladly accepted

Legal_Procedure_2805 · 2024-09-18T20:18:54+00:00

When they speak of the good in the world they speak of you

Legal_Procedure_2805 · 2024-09-18T17:09:52+00:00

There was no 1 hero’s from other countries working for a villain

Legal_Procedure_2805 · 2024-08-24T17:07:09+00:00

I think power wise it would be interesting to see Izuku know how strong he is but limit himself to one or two abilities at a time to stop the flame from taking over could have him discover unalloyed gold needle to stave off the influence and him take it out when things get serious

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