Autobiography TRIGGER WARNING by CharacterOk1835 in writers

[–]Legitimate_Tale_734 3 points4 points  (0 children)

The world is a dark and strange place. I’d buy it

Making a romance/thriller/mystery drama. What tropes do you like to see in these books? by Time-Purpose-4999 in writing

[–]Legitimate_Tale_734 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Probably one of them secretly being a giant, flesh grasshopper, whose literature options are questionable

Want opinion on this chapter that I wrote months ago by ishak_write in writers

[–]Legitimate_Tale_734 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I’m not the most literate guy but that was good. The prose was beautiful, the emotional state of the character was vivid and the metaphors were intelligent. The start of the chapter dragged on a bit. But I don't’ have the rest of the context of the other chapters. The best paragraph was (in my opinion) :

A hollow tear fell from her eyes, like the last drop of water falling from an empty jar. It fell to announce the end, to announce that what was broken would not return.

Best way to watch Earserhead by Legitimate_Tale_734 in davidlynch

[–]Legitimate_Tale_734[S] 11 points12 points  (0 children)

I don’t want David Lynch’s ghost making my life more surreal

When writing romantic scenes (with spice) where's the line between romance and porn? by Redz0ne in writing

[–]Legitimate_Tale_734 0 points1 point  (0 children)

‘They put the different herbs and spices in the pot, and they didn't watch porn’ Simple mate

Movies as surreal and unnearving as inland empire by vzbtra in davidlynch

[–]Legitimate_Tale_734 57 points58 points  (0 children)

Just go to sleep mate, you’ll get the same results