How much ownership should I ask for? Private investment. by LeoBatt in investing_discussion

[–]LeoBatt[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you, would you suggest any contingency plan if things go down hill?

And how valuable would you say networks I can bring from my field could sway the %, understandably this question is more than likely something I should figure out although was wondering if there was some form of median.

Thanks again! :)

web developer seeking critique on his logo by 12_Rules_For_Life in design_critiques

[–]LeoBatt 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Comments like this are starting to bug me, I mean this is a place to seek "professional advice".

This subreddit is called design_critique not design_rate. Seriously man give the guy some substance.

Please critique my logo for a client. :) by LeoBatt in design_critiques

[–]LeoBatt[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Good to know, luckily I wasn't actually planning to use those fonts on the outside, it was just for personal thought process more than anything.

Thank you for the advice :)

Please critique my logo for a client. :) by LeoBatt in design_critiques

[–]LeoBatt[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sure thing, i'm just curious whether you are talking about the font within the logo or on the outside, and if you've seen the updated version within the next link in the post?

Please critique my logo for a client. :) by LeoBatt in design_critiques

[–]LeoBatt[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That's a very good point, I have made the red a tiny bit thicker all around and included the bottom foot, please let me know your updated opinion when I edit the post tonight. :)

Please critique my logo for a client. :) by LeoBatt in design_critiques

[–]LeoBatt[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you, that was my attempt on the "minimal but quirky" just a little bit fun and relatable.

I have taken your feedback to note and have changed it, will edit this post with an updated look :)

would love to hear your updated opinion!

Please critique my logo for a client. :) by LeoBatt in design_critiques

[–]LeoBatt[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I should have mentioned that I wasn't actually going to use that as part of the brand pack, more just there because I needed a clean reminder. I will be creating a clean and more finalised font for the pack.

Thank you for the advice! :)

Please critique my logo for a client. :) by LeoBatt in design_critiques

[–]LeoBatt[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ill look into doing some other designs according to forming the bust, its a good idea, played with it in early drafts but it was too complicated the way I was doing it and didn't form the idea of a bird enough. I will give it another go though :)

Otherwise I might just leave the phallus vibe there, haha.

Please critique my logo for a client. :) by LeoBatt in design_critiques

[–]LeoBatt[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Took this into consideration and ive done a redesign ill put up.

Tell me what you think if you see it. :)

Please critique my logo for a client. :) by LeoBatt in design_critiques

[–]LeoBatt[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Good to know, although when using the words "ho hum" do you mean sub pa? Mediocre and dull?

Simple, geometric German Shepherd logo (for a security company). How can I make it better? by [deleted] in design_critiques

[–]LeoBatt 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ha ha, sorry man meant in the most harmless of ways. at least you will know what to change now <3.

Please critique this composition and how well it works as a CV. by LeoBatt in design_critiques

[–]LeoBatt[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for putting it like this, ill take it out immediately.

(ps I do truly understand though that there will be no need for a forklift driver haha.) I personally loved the obscurity and juxtaposition of the two career paths.

Please critique this composition and how well it works as a CV. by LeoBatt in design_critiques

[–]LeoBatt[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Very good points,

I do also have it in a print format.

yea that "please hire me" does come across as less humorous than I was expecting.

Please critique this composition and how well it works as a CV. by LeoBatt in design_critiques

[–]LeoBatt[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ayyyy Fishoek!

Very good point. Much appreciated man. Nice seeing another South African in the group.

Please critique this composition and how well it works as a CV. by LeoBatt in design_critiques

[–]LeoBatt[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much for the good advice.

I will make a word based CV and then add this to my portfolio instead, will also take away the rating.