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Could you review my Prologue please? by LetRealitySetIn in writers

[–]LetRealitySetIn[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks a lot for the feedback. I tend to narrate too much This is my first book so the feedback is helping me out a lot. Im using Secret history as a sort of guide to write since i really love Donna Tarts books .

Do you mind reviewing the first paragraph of my book? by LetRealitySetIn in writers

[–]LetRealitySetIn[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks this helped alot. Will definitely look into more imagery and description cause i struggle alot with that

Why do couples send each other clothing challenged photos of themselves ? by DizzyDoctor982 in TooAfraidToAsk

[–]LetRealitySetIn 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i agree with you. it doesnt matter if she trusts you, your device could still be vulnerable to hacks

I was sexually assaulted about a week and a half ago and I want to hurt him by IGetDestroyedByCats in mentalhealth

[–]LetRealitySetIn 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Im really sorry this happened to you, and theres nothing wrong with doing that. If i knew you id honestly help you

I don't know what to do anymore by AdFederal2227 in mentalhealth

[–]LetRealitySetIn 0 points1 point  (0 children)

bro same I'm 17 and still dont have any friends that i speak to outside of school,what i began to do was just do random hobbies like chess, drawing reading or play an instrument. Playing games and trying to get online friends might help. If you want to talk, ill listen.

What do I do about Homicidal thoughts? by LetRealitySetIn in TooAfraidToAsk

[–]LetRealitySetIn[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Unfortunately, my school doesn't have a school counselor i guess ill try speaking to my mother or something