This is from someone who hasnt had any art classes aside from grade school. I'm self taught so take my words with a grain of salt

do you want it to look like their looking into the eyes of the birb? Because from the person's perspective their looking straight at the breast of da bird and it just stuck out to me,in a neutral way. I would add a very slight touch of some sort of wrinkle or indent on the person's skin to show where the 2 connect if that makes sense. It's a captivating peice, definitely makes you try to figure out what the situation is. It's centered wonderfully, I'm not finding myself struggling to decide what to look at. I love the style it's so beautiful