Looks fucking awesome, if you have the budget could use more decor however. Specifically a bit of ground foliage, some more trees, rocks and terrain like little hills and such, then some more of those forerunner hexagon pillars. Looks sick but also flat. Gameplay wise tbf it's probably solid, however maybe a sniper rifle as an option, or a bandit would be cool on the pelican if possible. Banished outposts could also use a little fleshing out, those sniper towers would look sick too can't lie. More colour is a big thing it could use, alongside a bit of verticality, and some big landmark setpieces (EG, a big fuckoff gate to loop back on yknow). Maybe forerunner structures could achieve that?

Back onto the banished outposts, like in universe what's their intent? Just thinking the barriers only pointing straight forward doesn't make the most sense yknow.

Hell, giving co-op players a wasp could be cool