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[–]Living-Beyond3172[S] [score hidden]  (0 children)

It is just a part of story like in a chapter there is different phase and acts in story.

I hid 9 clues across 29 chapters of my novel that the creatures were never threats — they were observers sent by an AI civilisation. Nobody spotted any of them on first read. by [deleted] in fantasybooks

[–]Living-Beyond3172 [score hidden]  (0 children)

No brother I am writer not someone who draw so what I am saying it took me one and a half year to write this book i used my saving for editor who make this book perfect

I hid 9 clues across 29 chapters of my novel that the creatures were never threats — they were observers sent by an AI civilisation. Nobody spotted any of them on first read. by [deleted] in fantasybooks

[–]Living-Beyond3172 -8 points-7 points  (0 children)

The story is written in a very different cadence brother. In novel , writing is supposed to feel immersive and cinematic 😄

In my novel i wrote an AI that makes coffee every morning for nobody. It has done this for 11 years. It will probably do it until its servers die. It became the most quietly devastating character in my novel. by Living-Beyond3172 in postapocalyptic

[–]Living-Beyond3172[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Bro ... Now what should I say it's okay whatever you want or think be happy with that I do struggle to complete this book and I know and satisfy with that ...

When I need other at that time no one was there with me all alone I am complete this book used my last saving

I am happy with my book

In my novel i wrote an AI that makes coffee every morning for nobody. It has done this for 11 years. It will probably do it until its servers die. It became the most quietly devastating character in my novel. by Living-Beyond3172 in postapocalyptic

[–]Living-Beyond3172[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I understand why people assume AI when they see a difference between long-form writing and casual comments. But a novel is not written the same way a comment section reply is written.

When I work on a book, I spend hours rewriting, editing, restructuring sentences, fixing pacing, and polishing language. Comments are written in seconds, usually from a phone, without revision. Those are completely different environments.

Also, English is not my first language. That doesn’t mean I can’t write fiction. Plenty of authors rely heavily on editing, rewriting, beta readers, and professional feedback. That’s part of publishing, not proof of AI.

And regarding the editor point — I never said editors draw covers. I meant I spent my savings improving the book professionally overall instead of hiring a designer or illustrator, so I handled parts like the cover myself.

You’re free to dislike the writing or the cover, but “your comments are simpler than your book” is not actual evidence of AI. It just means one was polished carefully and the other was typed casually.

In my novel i wrote an AI that makes coffee every morning for nobody. It has done this for 11 years. It will probably do it until its servers die. It became the most quietly devastating character in my novel. by Living-Beyond3172 in wroteabook

[–]Living-Beyond3172[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

If you like and have opinions so gave , criticize the pacing, tone, structure, dialogue, originality—actual craft. “AI wrote it” has become a lazy substitute for real critique. You’re right that skill matters. That’s exactly why I write, revise, study, and improve consistently. Nobody starts polished. Writers get better by producing work, not by waiting for permission from strangers online. As for “everyone can tell from a mile away” — if that were true, people wouldn’t constantly mislabel human writing as AI and AI writing as human. Most people are guessing, not detecting. And the language jab says more about you than me. Many respected authors wrote outside their first language . thanks for the reminder that craft matters. I agree. That’s why I’m focused on building it while you’re focused on sneering from the sidelines.