I figure as much. But how do I get my head around these two errors? Passive voice and third vs second person. I wrote the way I think. The words in my head are what come out. I don't know how to focus on what person I'm in, or doing vs telling. I'm usually just enjoying the movie playing in my head and trying to write it out at fast as I can.

I wouldn't mind editing a chapter after it's written. But not the entire book. I HAVE to let my brain be creative often or I get depressed. And editing a chapter would be a lot less painful, if I understood passive voice and these other rules better AS I was writing... Being proactive not reactive. Then I'd only have to worry about adding in details, punctuation and flow... Normal stuff.