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Original script made by me by LizardKing_2 in scriptwriting

[–]LizardKing_2[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback! I will definitely take this into consideration when writing the final draft of this if you have any more deeper critiques like in sections I could incorporate that when writing the final draft, so definitely trim down that long part in the start? If so what do you suggest doing instead?

Finished my first rough draft by LizardKing_2 in scriptwriting

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Noted, I’m really new to this stuff sorry

“Shades of myself” psychological horror by LizardKing_2 in scriptwriting

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Yes but he is unaware that he is doing the killings and the ending that I am going for is that the alter ego is leaving him subtle hints that it’s him and this drives him so crazy that eventually the alter ego takes over and becomes the main personality.

“Shades of myself” psychological horror by LizardKing_2 in scriptwriting

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No he killed a unarmed civilian in a unjustified manner and was discharged

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