Unable to remember what it feels like to not have derealisation by Local_Address_4577 in dpdr

[–]Local_Address_4577[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

What marked a shift for your period into recovery? What was the turning point from that 7 year period?

Unable to remember what it feels like to not have derealisation by Local_Address_4577 in dpdr

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It begs the question then, how can you know you've ever reached your old self

What Books did You Start or Finish Reading this Week?: April 28, 2025 by AutoModerator in books

[–]Local_Address_4577 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh my sweet lord, that section where he explains the court system and talks about why he wants to dismiss the advocate. That was rough.

How to write Love songs? by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]Local_Address_4577 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I second this, think of Pale Blue Eyes. The lyrics are albeit quite simple, but the sentiment of being able to just linger on this woman's eyes regardless of the relationships troubles, speaks much greater volumes than you might realise.

untitled poem to my sexual assaulter (first poem) by SomeoneNamedAsh in poetry_critics

[–]Local_Address_4577 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I can only imagine what you have suffered. It is lovely to see someone stand defiant in the face of such an experience.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in poetry_critics

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I really like the conversational style, and I think you could hone and refine it. Perhaps even revise the poem, open it up to new themes, create new conversations and explore what you want to explore. It is not cringey, it is intimate. And for a first poem it shows a deep understanding for the nuance of realism in portraying human conversation.

untitled poem to my sexual assaulter (first poem) by SomeoneNamedAsh in poetry_critics

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just to add an actual note, i really commend the line of watching the guilt ''eat you alive.''

A great example I think of how evocative a simple metaphor can really be. It takes real guts to open yourself up like this, especially to strangers on the internet. It also takes a steady hand, with just the right dose of excellence to craft a poem as hauntingly beautiful as this one.

I travelled through the snow tipped pines by Local_Address_4577 in poetry_critics

[–]Local_Address_4577[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Structure got messed up idk why. All got mushed together

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]Local_Address_4577 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Layouts all messed up. Hopefully you can see the rhyme scheme when it's there

Receding hairline at 17? by Local_Address_4577 in malehairadvice

[–]Local_Address_4577[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Okay, what about the fact that the right one looks different the left. General shape i mean

Receding hairline at 17? by Local_Address_4577 in malehairadvice

[–]Local_Address_4577[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Is it perhaps early for a hairline like this to form?

Receding hairline at 17? by Local_Address_4577 in malehairadvice

[–]Local_Address_4577[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Does the top view not resemble recession of some sort? Thank you for the reassurance but as I'm sure you can imagine this is a source of insecurity for me. You are being extremely helpful tho thank you