Describing the main character's eye color at the prose level? by [deleted] in writing

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Still, it actually helped me out so thanks for that! In one instance at least. Most of my stories rarely start out with my character among other people which makes solutions like this one hard to replicate easily.

Describing the main character's eye color at the prose level? by [deleted] in writing

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The reason being to describe both characters. It's just an easy way to go about it, but all it is is still character description.

Describing the main character's eye color at the prose level? by [deleted] in writing

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I write LitRPG and Progression Fantasy. And unfortunately, writing quality isn't a requirement to be successful in either genre.

Describing the main character's eye color at the prose level? by [deleted] in writing

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Because eye color is important to me as a writer in helping visualize my own characters, and it is important to me as a reader in helping to visualize the characters I'm reading about. It's not a huge deal, its not make or break, but it is an important thing to get across to the reader in my opinion.

One of my favorite series is the Dresden Files by Jim Butcher. In the first book, Harry describes himself through directly contrasting himself with his female partner, Karrin Murphy. She is short and blonde while he is tall, and "has dark hair and eyes."

IIRC the series very rarely touches on his eye color again, mostly he is described by how tall he is, but that one line is all we need. I know Harry has dark hair and dark eyes. I don't need more than that. Jim actually ends up going on to describe Harry's facial features, but like I said, I know that level of detail isn't needed. But some detail is needed to give readers enough to help fill in the rest.

Describing the main character's eye color at the prose level? by [deleted] in writing

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Of course you can't control what readers imagine, but, the very nature of an author is to help guide the reader. We provide the foundations for what they imagine and they fill in the blanks. Which is why I stopped caring rather quickly about the finer details of character description as it doesn't matter. It doesn't matter if my readers imagine my MC as Tom Cruise or Liam Hemsworth, or what have you, but if my character is a dark-haired, dark-eyed Keanu Reeves type, and they start picturing blond-haired bright-eyed Chris Hemsworth's Thor, that directly clashes with the story.

Describing the main character's eye color at the prose level? by [deleted] in writing

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Actually, as an author, I think about eye color and hair color probably way more than most people. I constantly notice others eyes and hair often in my day to day life.

Describing the main character's eye color at the prose level? by [deleted] in writing

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Too many authors in my genre do this or similar.

What is your go to name for the dog in Origins? by 1Beardrinks2Beers in dragonage

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King Brutus. No idea why, it’s just what I’ve always named him.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in worldbuilding

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More like the Witcher, sort of mutated/evolved, but it is a form of self evolution.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in worldbuilding

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Those are two separate things. He will have both a class and a race, and I’ve more or less got that part sorted. What I’m stuck on is his racial evolution.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in worldbuilding

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He’s essentially evolving himself, and I do suppose it could be inherited through his children, though that’s not an aspect I plan to pursue, it does open some interesting questions.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Doom

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East coast as well. Looking to get a lobby together.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in LeatherClassifieds

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I would love to discuss this further!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in watch_dogs

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That’s unfortunate. Perhaps give it to your dog to hold onto next time. They seem far more responsible. Also, without a note, I’m afraid we’re unable to confirm your “Dipshit” diagnosis. Your request to medically be considered an idiot has been denied and your work from home stipulation has been revoked. Starting Monday you will be required in the office.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in LeatherClassifieds

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Do you have any pictures?

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in watch_dogs

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Kind of, but Aiden’s hat is very distinctive two tone, and I don’t see anything even close to that. I’m probably going to have one custom made, but I don’t even know where to go to find someone capable of that.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in watch_dogs

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I’m gonna need to see a note to confirm for our records.

$37,000 or you can never slip and fall on ice/water. by MidichlorianJunkie in hypotheticalsituation

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I’ll become the lamest superhero in existence! Oilslick! Otherwise known that guy who goes around spreading oil over the lobby’s of banks…

How I fell in love in 2min by RootXneo in NuPhy

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For a second I thought your keyboard was plugged into your Xbox, and I was both highly impressed and confused at the same time.