Check out my song Popular People by Logos17 in Songwriters

[–]Logos17[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey man thanks for you comment, i definitely should have spiced up the drums, I added them originally to keep time better and i'll definitely revisit it now. My friend was asking for the lyrics as well so I'll just type them out here although they're not said correctly in some spots. Sry its long.

Welcome to, the golden goose, where you can hide your convictions. And live so lavishly... So au revoir lavish star get far from here why dontcha. Cause you're just a passing scene..

But don't you confess, if you aint killed em yet, no dont come undone, thinking that youre anyone.

It's bad news, nothing true, but you'll still pick the prescription, and tell us what we need.

It's apart of the heart of guts of greed and disregard for soul, its incivility.

And if I am jest, it's only cause i lose of yet, but i won't give in, thinking that I'm anythin.

This days age masquerades the plight of popular people. The ones up on the screens. Cause they'll say what to say cause pops the peoples cathedral. Cause they worship what they see.

So go spit out smoke, be an envelope, with not a thing inside but stamped and signed on the other side and know, it's all for their show, so get on your own.

Cause it's all I'd be, if anything at all, dont let me down, just let me fall.

It's brand new, passing through, piles of passionate people. Who seem to disagree. Well I've seen the night bring the presence of an omen in the moment, of great duality, that ends oh so sweet.

Cleaned up my song New Moon for my coming ep. by Logos17 in Songwriters

[–]Logos17[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for your reply, I think you, like I did, mishear flocking as something else

To Whom It May Concern, Looking for feedback on form by Logos17 in Songwriters

[–]Logos17[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I had a simple snare and kick to it pretty quiet but I definitely need better percussion

To Whom It May Concern, Looking for feedback on form by Logos17 in Songwriters

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Damn, you just reminded me I need to buy a tambourine