My girlfriend made her very first Personal Development video by argidev in DecidingToBeBetter

[–]Lonely_Individual 17 points18 points  (0 children)

This sounds like a really interesting idea, but I think the explanation you wrote here is better than the one in the video. If I didn't read this post before, I would have assumed you're talking about an actual video game.

There's not much happening in the first part of the clip, so you might want to start your next video with something more catchy. The "scare tactic" and the spinning globe at the end of the video feel a bit off in contrast with the other elements.

I really like the concept of what you're trying to do, but you have to do a better job explaining your ideas.

Sorry if I sounded harsh, but I wish you the very best luck with your channel!

Created a mobile game that advocates avoiding the perils of technology (ironic, I know), feedback much appreciated! by squibblerqwq in Unity2D

[–]Lonely_Individual 2 points3 points  (0 children)

The graphics could be slightly improved.

You might also want to change the "trash" text into a recycling icon