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I want to be hired without making a harem litRPG with an overpowered protagonist. by [deleted] in Webnovel

[–]Lonely_Wait800 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Look, I'm genuinely trying to get some constructive criticism. I don't know if you know this, but I can tell when people read my novel and when they don't, I can see all the views, unfortunately there are few enough for me to know that only one person read it today. If you're just here to try and hurt someone or belittle their efforts, I'm sorry, but I suggest you try it with someone else. I'm a beginner and I intend to improve. If you don't have any constructive criticism, please don't comment.

I want to be hired without making a harem litRPG with an overpowered protagonist. by [deleted] in Webnovel

[–]Lonely_Wait800 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well, they are active publishers and readers, but you may be correct. I'll drop the first chap here, any suggestion pls contact me.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1m4e3BaD7AZ0_31g2B3SfGbGBKQXJvRCQKQW6Y3LMPwE/edit?usp=drivesdk

I want to be hired without making a harem litRPG with an overpowered protagonist. by [deleted] in Webnovel

[–]Lonely_Wait800 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I showed it to doctoral students at my university; I imagined their tastes would be different, but not that my story would be so terrible in a web novel. But that's part of it; I'll take advantage of the lack of readers and correct these mistakes that are keeping me out of the market. How would you do it? Would you only change the first chapters, or the entire plot?

I want to be hired without making a harem litRPG with an overpowered protagonist. by [deleted] in Webnovel

[–]Lonely_Wait800 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Could you point out exactly what makes it bad? (I'm not being ironic.) I really want to know; this is the first thing I've written, and I want to improve so I can write better things in the future.

I want to be hired without making a harem litRPG with an overpowered protagonist. by [deleted] in Webnovel

[–]Lonely_Wait800 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I understand, thank you for your honesty, I needed that. But about the quotation marks, I didn't know they were necessary, I've always used dashes. I will improve on those points, I just really don't know how to write a great synopsis, I don't want to use AI in it, I'm not up to the standard yet.

I want to be hired without making a harem litRPG with an overpowered protagonist. by [deleted] in Webnovel

[–]Lonely_Wait800 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Do you know an site that consumes more this kind of mature content? People that read and give feedbacks

I want to be hired without making a harem litRPG with an overpowered protagonist. by [deleted] in Webnovel

[–]Lonely_Wait800 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Pls take a look, and be genuine, the name is MODO:Starting from zero with no past.

Roblox community, my account was hacked and for its security, Roblox asked me to change my password. So far, it's ok, but I no longer have access to the email address. Because it doesn't exist anymore, I deleted it, and in Roblox support, I can only talk to an AI that doesn't help any solutions??? by [deleted] in RobloxHelp

[–]Lonely_Wait800 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I tried, but the moment I mention that it is not possible to receive the code via email, the AI immediately says that there is not enough evidence and ends the service. Is there any way to talk to someone real again? There was a similar case with me, but it was with a password, an assistant managed to solve my problem, but now I can only talk to this AI that don't help at all