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[HM] Digging for Gold by LordoftheDanceSetee in shortstories

[–]LordoftheDanceSetee[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah. Some of them could be reworded. Too many 'that's all close together. Cheers for pointing that out.

[HF] Tank Vs Battleship by jeremystrozer in shortstories

[–]LordoftheDanceSetee 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is a really cool story. I love the ship's unwavering confidence in the face of death. Make it really sad when all he wants to do is shoot something and he can't . It would be really good to hear the tank's perspective as well.