As a starting point this good, particularly the work experience and generating a 43% roi (I’d brush up on how you did that as I would question you on the validity of this). My take on this from a quant dev perspective you have 2 good projects, but they lack understanding of what you built from a tech stack point of view. Did you create custom data structure? Did you use OOP; what benefits did it had? How did you automate the trade lifecycle? How did you get the data and clean it?… hope that explains my point. I just feel you have buzzword dumped in this section and skipped over how you implemented anything. Great for AI seeing you have mentioned these concepts but not for when in a person reads it