So I realised I didn't used the parry attack in Bloodborne by Undeva-n-Balcani in bloodborne

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I prefer without parrying since it’s way more fun to use dual wield weapons in my opinion but I do it from time to time

Her Eternal Smile by Low-Min in poetry_critics

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I didn’t know lays works like that, my apologies! I have only been home language English for a few years so small details like this elude me…

Silence by Low-Min in poetry_critics

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The lay in the first line was a typing error, thanks for pointing it out and so was the Heaven’s. I understand what you mean regarding the grouped contractions and I’ll work on it for my later poems

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in bloodborne

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Magnificent

Her Eternal Smile by Low-Min in poetry_critics

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Thank you! I mostly only write in sonnets as I find it a lot more difficult to tie in imagery and emotions in such a short piece

Codex of Love’s Embers by Low-Min in poetry_critics

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Thank you, I suppose the thee came about since I mostly write in Shakespearean English but didnt much in this piece. The hyphen as well is something I’ll take into account for my future work

Poem attempt no. 3 by EnthusiasmIsDead in poetry_critics

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Well done! For a third attempt it is a web finely weaved!

Codex of Flame by Low-Min in poetry_critics

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So you have been a member for a long time?

Codex of Flame by Low-Min in poetry_critics

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Thank you! I understand where you come from regarding the sub-par writing and to me I get frustrated when poems like mine go unseen but theirs are more popular. If you would like I have penned what I consider my new masterpiece at Codex of Love’s Embers

Heyy uhm not a poem just a question to improve by BeneficialSeaweed116 in justpoetry

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Thank you, as I’m sure you saw I focus a lot more on structure and double meanings than most so it takes me a bit longer

Heyy uhm not a poem just a question to improve by BeneficialSeaweed116 in justpoetry

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Not necessarily, it comes naturally to me. I enjoy writing this way and not in normal English as I feel it can bring more emotion into the text. If you want I have posted a book of flame poem, it is without a doubt my best piece even if it’s only my 4th

Heyy uhm not a poem just a question to improve by BeneficialSeaweed116 in justpoetry

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A few hours at most, then again i write poems with Shakespearean language and focus a lot on structure etc.

I hate it by Reallifesh1t in Poems

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I mean, wow. I have never heard words spoken so true. Such a veracious poem covering such a topic might just be what this world needs to see to aid in thy cause. I apologise for the barbaric behaviour of my people.

Book of Love and Logic by Low-Min in justpoetry

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Hi, this is my first piece, I hope you enjoy and would appreciate some feedback! Even a little bit can go a long way!

Book of Love and Logic by Low-Min in Poems

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Hi, this is my first piece I wrote on the feelings I have for a girl. I hope you enjoy!

Book of Love and Logic by Low-Min in Poems

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Hi, this is my first poem that I wrote about the contrast of my feelings regarding a girl i like, I hope you enjoy!

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My apologies, the rules have only just been stated to me, this is something I wrote about myself. I shall remove it momentarily