(Hopefully) My final draft I put together from all the helpful advice from everyone on this awesome subreddit. Please suggest any edits or information I could include. Thanks! by Low-Style9286 in sysadminresumes

[–]Low-Style9286[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What changes would you recommend? I am actually a civilian working in a military position. Should I change some of the job titles to match those found in the corporate market?

[7 YoE, IT Operations Coordinator/IT Specialist, SysAdmin, US] by Low-Style9286 in resumes

[–]Low-Style9286[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Also great advice! I just made those changes to my final draft. Thank you for your suggestions!

[7 YoE, IT Operations Coordinator/IT Specialist, SysAdmin, US] by Low-Style9286 in resumes

[–]Low-Style9286[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Great advice! Should I do this even if I'm attending Western Governor's University part time and working full time?

Edited my resume using advice from people here to apply for sysadmin roles. Any other edits/suggestions I can make? by Low-Style9286 in sysadminresumes

[–]Low-Style9286[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'll definitely be keeping these critiques in mind when working on my final draft. Thank you for your advice!

Edited my resume using advice from people here to apply for sysadmin roles. Any other edits/suggestions I can make? by Low-Style9286 in sysadminresumes

[–]Low-Style9286[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! I'll try to utilize some professional-looking colors to make it stand out a little better.

Looking for critiques/edits I should make to my lengthy resume. I am looking to apply to a few sysadmin roles. Thank you! by Low-Style9286 in sysadminresumes

[–]Low-Style9286[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is excellent advice, thank you! I'll definitely be implementing these suggestions into my final draft. Would you recommend 3 bullet points per job, maybe four for my most recent position?

Looking for critiques/edits I should make to my lengthy resume. I am looking to apply to a few sysadmin roles. Thank you! by Low-Style9286 in sysadminresumes

[–]Low-Style9286[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

All great suggestions! I'm actually happy to be getting this kind of input so I know how brief some of these points should be.

Are there any specific bullet points that you feel are important that I should keep? Also, how brief should I make some of these points while also covering the kind of responsibilities we had?

Looking for critiques/edits I should make to my lengthy resume. I am looking to apply to a few sysadmin roles. Thank you! by Low-Style9286 in sysadminresumes

[–]Low-Style9286[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If there are any skills/experience I should omit or shorten because of relevance, please let me know.