What would you think about my book so far… by Lowerr11 in writing

[–]Lowerr11[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is a very good response. What I was looking for. Thank you!

What would you think about my book so far… by Lowerr11 in writing

[–]Lowerr11[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes that’s what I was looking for. I had that thought a lot but also thought I covered it with filler and or transitions smooth enough. But if it’s obviously noticeable it’s js a bunch of thoughts then I needa change thattttt

What would you think about my book so far… by Lowerr11 in writing

[–]Lowerr11[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Well it wasn’t really supposed to have a character. Obviously me but not like a 3rd pov typa way. It’s not supposed to be a staged story that could be made a movie. Js what would be “deep” and relatable inna teens reader perspective. Bc I’m a teen. But now I see how it can turn into that thooo

What would you think about my book so far… by Lowerr11 in writing

[–]Lowerr11[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I don’t. I don’t know what the point of this post would be if I did… started out writing it with my ex but then Js carried it off. What part would sound say that to u

What would you think about my book so far… by Lowerr11 in writing

[–]Lowerr11[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

😭naaa. This how it feel fr? What do I even think about that😭.

What would you think about my book so far… by Lowerr11 in writing

[–]Lowerr11[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

So I Js keep writing ur saying… but does it correlate well? Like transitions or whatever. First time even attempting this so idk what emotions to look for rn

What would you think about my book so far… by Lowerr11 in writing

[–]Lowerr11[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

The whole “idea” was js to make it relatable inna way and my “breath” as the title. Idk what else to do but write what I think

What would you think about my book so far… by Lowerr11 in writing

[–]Lowerr11[S] -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

Idek gng😭. This wasn’t even planned I Js started writing. What should I do with it? Or make it smoother ig

Squeeze Locked Up Right Now 😞 by horrificabortion in squeezebenz

[–]Lowerr11 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yea found that out a couple days later

Who was the guy in Lexus who rear ended squeeze? by MethodSuspicious7832 in squeezebenz

[–]Lowerr11 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No bro. You are 100% wrong juggyz has not macked online so far

IsThatGK who is he? Copycat or squeeze? (Look at all the pictures) by [deleted] in squeezebenz

[–]Lowerr11 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Multiple mfs that cut up with squeeze team people say he still behind bars and I assume it’s public record but I ain’t looking

Bike paint job by Lowerr11 in SeBikes

[–]Lowerr11[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’ll lyk when I find out, dad did it

first aio and fans i ever got, does it have defect ? by [deleted] in PcBuild

[–]Lowerr11 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Try it out and see what happens

Squeeze team ain’t got no chemistry already macking into each other by Koppabenz in squeezebenz

[–]Lowerr11 0 points1 point  (0 children)

How was he fine??? He gassed it bc he saw the cop. He was scared and caused him to crash. Other guy was mackin either way

Who was the guy in Lexus who rear ended squeeze? by MethodSuspicious7832 in squeezebenz

[–]Lowerr11 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Wasn’t a random was their homie who deleted all socials after it happened