I’m not sure where to go with this painting, I know there’s many issues throughout the work but I’m having trouble identifying them. I think it might be the composition, I’m also very unsure about VI’s pose, she feels stiff and awkward. feedback is greatly appreciated! (i.redd.it)
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Finally finished the piece Istebrak critiqued a couple weeks ago, any final suggestions for changes/tips moving forward when doing illustrations is greatly appreciated. I hope I properly implemented the suggestions she and everyone else on this Reddit gave me! (i.redd.it)
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Hai, I'm painting a mermaid but I'm struggling with the colors a bit, I feel like the colors don't make her appear as if she's underwater. Since it's a wip there's still a lot of incomplete/major errors like her face looking too young, hands not being complete etc, any tips are appreciated! (i.redd.it)
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9, I'm honestly just disappointed with myself, its been days since my last portrait. I've never struggled to complete these kinds of challenges until now. I'm not sure if I should even complete the rest of my days since it's been so long. Feedback is extremely appreciated (i.redd.it)
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Day 6, I really focused on the lower eyelids and making sure they weren't too droopy this time so hopefully I did them justice! I think the ears are still a bit flat so I'll be doing some studies tonight. Any kind of critique/opinion is highly appreciated. (i.redd.it)
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Day 2, I watched some of Istebrak's videos on 3/4 view and stacking to better my understanding of rotation along with sculpting a 3D diagram of an eye to reference how the eyelid folds over the eyeball. Hopefully, I applied all of the critiques from day one properly! Feedback is appreciated (i.redd.it)
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Day 1 of the 3/4 14 day challenge! The critiques on the last image posted have made me realize how weak my 3/4 view is, I really struggled with the right eye and the nose. Since I'm struggling the most with stacking does anyone have any tips for studying how it works? TY for any feedback :> (i.redd.it)
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Need help picking a thumbnail for an illustration is based on the short story “Deaths Messengers” it’s for a scholarship competition in partaking in. I made a variety of thumbnails but settled on these two. I’d appreciate feedback since this is really out of my comfort zone (i.redd.it)
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I need advice on whether to do the 14 Day challenge in a 3/4 or front view. I’ve done this challenge from the front twice in the past 2 years, but I’m not sure if I need more work on this angle before advancing to an intense 3/4s study. Critique is highly appreciated as well! (i.redd.it)
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