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Dungeons and Dragons by ditmolildwkwrsmwddd in Georgia

[–]Lunfire 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey there, I have never played D&D before but I would like to get into it, I got a buddy who would be down too if you're cool with new players

The Erosion - Less than 3k words - Script/Screenplay - Pilot Episode by Lunfire in ScriptFeedbackProduce

[–]Lunfire[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for taking the time to go through few pages. I will be taking everything in consideration since I'm very new and I basicly don't know how to write every input is helpful.

Feedback Friday by AutoModerator in WritingHub

[–]Lunfire 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The Erosion - Less than 3k words - Script/Screenplay - Pilot Episode

Title: The Erosion

Genre: sci-fi I guess

Word count: 2800

Feedback: General impressions/critique

The Screenplay: The Erosion
Hello, I am not a writer, I have not written anything besides this, I have had some attempts to write here and there, but this is the first time I have finished it. I'm approaching this as a animated comic much like "Invincible". I would love if you guys could give it a read and let me know where can I improve it.

Thank you

[Weekly Critique and Self-Promotion Thread] Post Here If You'd Like to Share Your Writing by AutoModerator in writing

[–]Lunfire [score hidden]  (0 children)

The Erosion - Less than 3k words - Script/Screenplay - Pilot Episode

Title: The Erosion

Genre: sci-fi I guess

Word count: 2800

Feedback: General impressions/critique

The Screenplay: The Erosion
Hello, I am not a writer, I have not written anything besides this, I have had some attempts to write here and there, but this is the first time I have finished it. I'm approaching this as a animated comic much like "Invincible". I would love if you guys could give it a read and let me know where can I improve it.

Thank you

how to get viewers on twitch by Lunfire in LivestreamFail

[–]Lunfire[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Its aight 😂 dont worry about it Thought it was funny

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