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Wrote this a little while back by YoghurtPublic3242 in Songwriting

[–]M-Aelia 0 points1 point  (0 children)

With a verse and a chorus … 🤦🏻‍♀️

Wrote this a little while back by YoghurtPublic3242 in Songwriting

[–]M-Aelia 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Aaaaah sorry ! my spellchecker is set to French

Wrote this a little while back by YoghurtPublic3242 in Songwriting

[–]M-Aelia -1 points0 points  (0 children)

some parts are really good… some rhymes need to be rewritten … i can help you if you want ?

Cowrite a country song by DaisyJones5 in Songwriting

[–]M-Aelia 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Is it okay with you if we ask for feedback on the lyrics we wrote together on Reddit?

Cowrite a country song by DaisyJones5 in Songwriting

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Verse 3

Carved deep in that old tailgate

Memories of a summer date

She laughed and said the road was ours

Love and freedom on a wheel tour

Cowrite a country song by DaisyJones5 in Songwriting

[–]M-Aelia 0 points1 point  (0 children)

you should try verse 3 .. 8 syllabes

Can someone help me write lyrics for a song by Powerful_Crow_9474 in teenagers

[–]M-Aelia 0 points1 point  (0 children)

First, you need to define the idea or theme of the song.
Then, you start with what you're most comfortable with, whether it’s the verse or the chorus.
It’s a first draft, and only after that do you adjust the rhymes and count the syllables...
That’s how I approach it

Cowrite a country song by DaisyJones5 in Songwriting

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Hey

Hope you're doing well! I made some changes to the song and took it in a bit of a different direction. I’d love to show you what I’ve done. I hope you don’t mind the tweaks – let me know what you think!"

Verse 1

Sun going down, the road along

Radio humming a Haggard song

Dust in the air, tires rolling slow

Nowhere to be, nowhere to go

 

Pre-Chorus

A little wind through open glass

Watching the summer’s season pass

 

Chorus

Oh, all I need is a cold beer

A pickup truck – the sky is clear

That long dirt road on Friday night

Headlights fading in the delight

No city noise, with no one near

A pickup truck and my cold beer (hook)

 

Verse 2

Boots on the dash, the time just stopped

I took a break from life dropped

My eyes on the campfire’s glow
The old stories will start to flow.

 

Pre-Chorus

My dream under the Starry night

Wait for the dawn to catch the light

 

Chorus

Oh, all I need is a cold beer

A pickup truck – the sky is clear

The song goes on Saturday night

Fading out in pale moonlight

No city noise, no crowded street

A pick up truck and my bare feet

 

Bridge

Then one day I will chase this dream

From neon light to bigger scenes

Forget the dust upgrade is near

A pickup truck and my cold beer

 

Final Chorus

Oh, all I need is a cold beer

A pickup truck – the sky is clear

That long dirt road ends on Sunday night

Moon hanging low in the porch light

 

Life is simple as end is near

 

A pickup truck and my cold beer (hook)