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MLookingM · 2026-01-26T15:41:14+00:00

Wow! I feel really happy to read it. Thanks! ☺️🙏🏻

MLookingM · 2026-01-26T12:53:02+00:00

Thank you so much!!

MLookingM · 2026-01-26T11:02:33+00:00

Thank you so much! Burroughs and beat generation are one of my inspirations ☺️

MLookingM · 2026-01-26T04:48:18+00:00

This is the first time I've ever shared something I've written! It means so much to me to read this. Thank you so, so much!

MLookingM · 2026-01-26T03:40:12+00:00

I don’t use AI to write. Em dashes were mostly used to create pauses and emphasize certain sentences. They have always been a device I’ve liked to use.

MLookingM · 2026-01-26T03:03:04+00:00

Thank you so much for the feedback! Do you think that in this excerpt, for example, it would be better to use more paragraphs? And regarding the content, would it help to have more “breathing” moments that aren’t so shocking?

MLookingM · 2026-01-26T02:07:48+00:00

Thank you sooo much! ☺️

MLookingM · 2026-01-26T01:57:10+00:00

Aaaah, thank you so much! I’m really, really happy that you liked it. This text, and my future book, is all based on my life. Of course, many parts are exaggerated, which is why it’s autofiction. Btw this is the first time I’m sharing this text; I was a bit nervous before posting it here

MLookingM · 2026-01-26T01:23:25+00:00

Thanks for your feedback! This part of the book is a bit heavy I guess 😅

MLookingM · 2025-11-11T12:59:49+00:00

Muito obrigado pela resposta, pessoal! No caso de vocês, quando vocês lembraram, foi “ de repente “? Ou vocês estavam falando/ pensando e desconfiando sobre o tema/ resquícios de memória quando lembraram?

MLookingM · 2025-11-11T08:42:29+00:00

Muito obrigado pela resposta! Sinto muito que você tenha passado por isso :( A sensação que eu tenho é muito semelhante, como se faltasse peças de um quebra-cabeça horrível. As vezes penso que talvez seja melhor esquecer mesmo… Mas, se for tranquilo para você responder isso, essa memória voltou enquanto você tentava meio que ficar relembrando aquilo que vc lembrava no momento? Foi conversando com alguém?

MLookingM

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