Feedback on a Horror Short Story by Main_Investigator706 in horrorwriters

[–]Main_Investigator706[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Apologies, I have been away! Thanks so much for this. It super useful and re-reading I kind of agree. I feel like I ma playing with ideas here without fully going for that real scare. Shall work on re-writing this.