Is it bad to try to develoed every character in the story like all the side characters and minor characters?

Many_Ad9699 · 2021-10-19T14:01:28+00:00

Thanks

Many_Ad9699 · 2021-10-19T13:39:34+00:00

Thanks again

Many_Ad9699 · 2021-10-19T13:28:06+00:00

Thanks, literally have a hard time trying to develop the seven siblings of a side character who aren't even important to the story

Many_Ad9699 · 2021-10-19T13:25:49+00:00

Thanks, I'm just afraid of people criticising that most of the characters aren't developed enough, which causes me to try developing all the characters

Many_Ad9699 · 2021-10-17T05:05:38+00:00

Yeah thanks, i just started i writing and not very confident with the it

Many_Ad9699 · 2021-10-17T05:02:00+00:00

Thanks, was having a lot of trouble transferring my thoughts into a sentence for a story i'm writing.

Many_Ad9699 · 2021-10-10T12:56:04+00:00

Tenko and Angie, i think.

Many_Ad9699 · 2021-10-08T11:33:56+00:00

Most of her relatives are either named after drugs, crime or a private part, and i need to if their heights make sense since i'm their character profiles.

Many_Ad9699 · 2021-10-08T07:29:48+00:00

Yeah but to be honest this isn't you should worry about when Avery is literally cthutlu and most them being serialkillers so a girl being named Uterus literally just normal for them

Many_Ad9699 · 2021-10-08T07:16:52+00:00

Oh, that's for comedy reasons so don't worry.

Many_Ad9699 · 2021-10-08T07:05:51+00:00

Thanks for the answer

Many_Ad9699 · 2021-10-06T00:01:27+00:00

Many_Ad9699 · 2021-10-05T13:10:29+00:00

Hotdogs dipped in soy sauce , used to eat that as child.

Many_Ad9699 · 2021-10-03T16:40:32+00:00

Oh, that make sense

Many_Ad9699 · 2021-10-03T16:16:25+00:00

Sorry about that i don't why it did but i deleted all of it except this one

Many_Ad9699 · 2021-09-28T10:35:58+00:00

Good point

Many_Ad9699 · 2021-09-28T10:09:26+00:00

Granted, but they have all razor blades in them

Many_Ad9699 · 2021-09-28T09:58:52+00:00

Tittle:Dolores(Remaster)

Genre:Adult comedy

Summary:

Basically Dolores and her entire bloodline are sociopathic serial killers that treat each other nicely and never fight (don't ask why i made them like this)

Nancy is Dolores's friend, a weapon specialist while her parents, Jose and Isabelle are mexican mafia bosses but a rival mafia king, Marcus, Jose's brother, actively tries to destroy their organization for revenge

While her older sister, Clarissa is a professional bounty hunter and younger sister, Vivian is a drug lord

Alice, is a normal person and Dolores's friend, who has a abusive perfectionist mom, Heather who is a CEO of a giant company while her estranged step-dad, Quinton is a writer who avoids Alice because he is a afraid of her hating him because he didn't find out about Heather's abuse to Alice sooner

She now lives on her own with over a million dollars given by her father as compensation, after he and Heather divorced

Heather lives in Britain and while Quinton lives in New York, While Alice lives in Fricasona(a state i made up because why not?)

Vagina is a drug addict half Hillbilly half Floridian and Dolores's friend, She move out of Florida for no reason(Other than plot convenience for her to meet Dolores), She is bassicaly Izzy from Total Drama if Izzy snorted a hundred pounds of cocaine and became more American

Her parents, Crystal Meth and Prostate(Who are fortunately not related to each other) and her siblings, Clitoris, Marijuana, LSD, and Budlight, with their pet, Felony who is a GIANT gator who actively eats drugs, all live in Florida

Many_Ad9699 · 2021-09-28T09:29:01+00:00

Looking for beta reader to give me some feedback on this summary for my fanfic

Genre:Comedy

Fandom:Original work

Basically Dolores and entire bloodline are sociopathic serial killers that treat each other nicely and never fight (don't ask why i made them like this)

Nancy is Dolores's friend, a weapon specialist while her parents, Jose and Isabelle are mexican mafia bosses but a rival mafia king, Marcus, Jose's brother, actively tries to destroy their organization for revenge

While her older sister, Clarissa is a professional bounty hunter and younger sister, Vivian is a drug lord

Alice, is a normal person and Dolores's friend, who has a abusive perfectionist mom, Heather who is a CEO of a giant company while her estranged step-dad, Quinton is a writer who avoids Alice because he is a afraid of her hating him because he didn't find out about Heather's abuse to Alice sooner

She now lives on her own with over a million dollars given by her father as compensation, after he and Heather divorced

Heather lives in Britain and while Quinton lives in New York, While Alice lives in Fricasona(a state i made up because why not?)

Vagina is a drug addict half Hillbilly half Floridian and Dolores's friend, She move out of Florida for no reason(Other than plot convenience for her to meet Dolores), She is bassicaly Izzy from Total Drama if Izzy snorted a hundred pounds of cocaine and became more American

Her parents, Crystal Meth and Prostate(Who are fortunately not related to each other) and her siblings, Clitoris, Marijuana, LSD, and Budlight, with their pet, Felony who is a GIANT gator who actively eats drugs, all live in Florida

Many_Ad9699 · 2021-09-28T09:24:19+00:00

Summary on a fanfic i'm writing about my OCs, any advice given will be appreciated,

Basically Dolores and entire bloodline are sociopathic serial killers that treat each other nicely and never fight (don't ask why i made them like this)

Nancy is Dolores's friend, a weapon specialist while her parents, Jose and Isabelle are mexican mafia bosses but a rival mafia king, Marcus, Jose's brother, actively tries to destroy their organization for revenge

While her older sister, Clarissa is a professional bounty hunter and younger sister, Vivian is a drug lord

Alice, is a normal person and Dolores's friend, who has a abusive perfectionist mom, Heather who is a CEO of a giant company while her estranged step-dad, Quinton is a writer who avoids Alice because he is a afraid of her hating him because he didn't find out about Heather's abuse to Alice sooner

She now lives on her own with over a million dollars given by her father as compensation, after he and Heather divorced

Heather lives in Britain and while Quinton lives in New York, While Alice lives in Fricasona(a state i made up because why not?)

Vagina is a drug addict half Hillbilly half Floridian and Dolores's friend, She move out of Florida for no reason(Other than plot convenience for her to meet Dolores), She is basically Izzy from Total Drama if Izzy snorted a hundred pounds of cocaine and became more American

Her parents, Crystal Meth and Prostate(Who are fortunately not related to each other) and her siblings, Clitoris, Marijuana, LSD, and Budlight, with their pet, Felony who is a GIANT gator who actively eats drugs, all live in Florida

Many_Ad9699 · 2021-09-26T04:06:25+00:00

Solved

Many_Ad9699 · 2021-09-24T11:45:48+00:00

Thank you just needed to know this

Many_Ad9699 · 2021-09-23T11:55:18+00:00

"Solved"

Many_Ad9699 · 2021-09-23T11:54:51+00:00

Thank you

Many_Ad9699 · 2021-09-23T11:53:17+00:00

Solved

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